Two days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
10 OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH MMMMMMMMYYYYYYYY GGGGGOOOOOOODDDDDDDDD! i expected jim and pam to end up together in this story, no doubt, but you've fulfilled my every fantasy with this chapter. seriously i'm feeling like jim now, everything is perfect in his world now that's he's engaged to pam.
okay, i don't want to abuse this perfection in any way, but i do want to say that this has literally and honestly been the best story i've ever read. i've said that so many times but i didn't really mean it until now. (wow i feel like i'm professing my love jim-style to this story. but then again, i am.)
this is just that amazing. congrats on the most perfect story ever, and pass that on to starrydreamer as well!
10 This is so great! I just breezed through it in an hour. Wonderful job describing all of those awful moments with Roy and how Jim came to rescue Pam. Why did you stop all of a sudden? You continued all of your other stories and left us hanging like a dead end high five (another lame metaphor... lol). Keep going and I hope you get this review since the review alert feature stopped working in January. God how I hate that... KEEP GOING!!! :)
Sometimes, still, he would wake up in the middle of the night just to make sure that she was okay, that there was no blood. And only when he had made sure of it, made sure that it was just her, clean and peaceful, did he close his eyes and fall back asleep.
10 This was beautiful! Amazingly well written and the way you flowed from one time point to another was perfect. Great job, and I hope I can read something new from you one of these days!
It's the day before Valentine's Day of 2021, and ten-year-old Laura Halpert is making plans. Yes, it's more Kidfic.
This is part of my series: "Holiday: Just One Day out of Life."
10 Lol - that was so perfect. I loved Laura's explanation and Pam's 'daddy spoiling-time' line. So cute. And the fact that Heike was a SCHRUTE - oh-so perfect. What a lovely, hilarious story. Great job!
10 oh my god, that comment about already paying for it and the salesladies had me laughing so hard i nearly dropped my computer. great bet you had going there, michael was so realistic and hilarious! man that was good! TWSS. lol. (seriously, i promise my mind isn't really that sick. i'm just tired that's all!)
Barrettes, bras, neck ties (things that open and close.)
Set sometime between The Job and Fun Run; no spoilers.
yay pam! i loved this cute one shot! i'm not going to see what else you've written...
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed, pamelamorganhalpert!
10 perfect. i won't ruin it's perfectionism by trying to dissect it's perfect-ness, so i'll just leave it al that.
10 oh wow, that was good! i know what you mean, i hate when jim and pam are mad at each other, and i can't stand it when it lasts long. but i do however love the stories when they have arguments, because they always end really cute-ly (is that a word???). anyway, great job!
10 so adorable. i love all the love - cute proposal, too!
completely random: why oh why on your author's page does it say you've only written 4 stories??? you've got at least one for every letter!
10 wow. that was good. very hot and steamy, nicely done Emilys List! that was great, and you wrote more. so happy right now!
10 oh my god. i was laughing so loud at this chapter! and let me tell you, i have mastered the silent laugh, so this was an impressive feat of yours to get me to break away from my silent habit.
great job with this story, this was awesome!
btw, have you noticed how the office loves the word awesome? katy sings the a-w-e-s-o-m-e cheer in booze cruise, and then there's the awesome blossom incident. just saying...
10 that was incredible! great job with the proposal - i loved how you focused more on the emotions than the dialogue - nice touch!
p.s., i found your profile from the other story you collaborated on - that's been one of my favorite's to read ever on MTT-it was amazing!
10 O.h. m.y. g.o.d. That was just too perfect. You hear me? I loved that and it was just incredible. Great job, and just wow, again.
P.S. I don't mean to nag, but could you please reply this as I think for some reason the reply feature is broken for me or something - as I don't seem to be getting emails from MTT lately (like the confirmation letter when they post a fic or something). Thanks so much!
10 wow. i realized halfway through the first chapter that i'd already read all of this, yet i re-read it because it's so cute and fun to read. i can't wait to see that next chapter, and i'm just about to read it. so excited. i'll make sure it review, please write a fifth chapter, i'm hoping for 40 total just like you promised! 10/10!
adorable! i'm so excited for the next chapter. keep going!
9 10 that was great. i love how pam starts talking to jim about sex in front of her mom - whew, poor jim - awkward!!!
great chapter! and it was flawlessly written.
10 definitely up there. great job with this one kestrel! i think i'm going to make myself stop reading for a bit and finish homework, but i'll read before i go to bed!
yup, Claire (that's me), the famous procrastinator actually did finish her homework. i'm usually a perfectionist, so if i give myself less time to get something done then i usually work quicker, with fewer breaks, thus getting more done than i would with more time. did that make any sense?
and about the reviews, it was my pleasure reading, really. just keep going!
10 wow, that was so touching, i love how this went from serious, to silly, to playful, then romantic. fantastic. keep going! i can't wait for an update!
crap, i still have to do homework. darn.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I've been reading through all your lovely, lovely reviews - it means a lot that you took the time to review each chapter! But I hope you still managed to finish your homework? Thank you so much for the positive feedback :).
10 okay, forget this was my favorite silly chapter yet, i loved the pet names, and the shoes in the middle of the room. it's kind of nice to have a chapter that isn't so essential to the plot just as a quick, cute filler. great job!
sorry if it was rude i called this a filler. i don't mean it in a bad way, but i'm too lazy to delete it. sorry!
Author's Response: Oh, and that's not rude at all! It was most definitely a filler...I don't work with too much plot in these little phone conversations, and this one especially was meant to be just light and easy.
10 i loved the serious part about pam talking about roy. very well done with that bit!
10 lucky you i seriously can't reading. i wonder what mr. monroe would say if i told him that's why i couldn't write my audit letter... hmmm
i think i've read this chapter before, but so what, i love it to pieces.
and i laughed so hard when i read the artist for the song. anne barnard, i thought you were talking about andy bernard. lol!
you are not cheesy, this is incredible! i absolutely love this, i'm dead serious.
very realistic dialog!!! and all together great idea for this story, i'm so glad you continued, and i can't believe i hadn't discovered this sooner.
nice bit about the halpert babies, i though i'd made that very clear. lol!
sorry if i don't review for a bit, i'm just taking a quick break from stupid homework and don't have much time.
that was so beautiful, and i'm not in a silly mood anymore. that was just so beautiful, i love how clearly you showed their love for each other in this chapter. amazingly well done. i'd give you a 12/10 if i could. maybe a 16 since that's my favorite number.