Reviewer: lisahoo Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: these are the first hands to tremble in my hold
Yay! So happy to see this on MTT.
I love how you balance Sentimental!Jim who is will do anything for his pregnant wife (including buying fruity soap at airport prices) with Jim who thinks like a guy. I think 'balls-deep' is my new favorite smutty phrase. Wow.
I also really like how your Pam isn't some china doll -- face it, she didn't get in her current condition by immaculate conception. They have S-E-X.
And since Pam is getting to be more self-confident in her career, you can bet that would translate into the bedroom. She rocked Jim's world even when she had frizzy hair and striped blouses, once she started getting it regular from a guy who was good to her, you know she got her groove back.
Hope to see more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback; it helps me stay on the right track for next time. (And I hope there will be a next time! Haha.) :)