Reviewer: belsum Signed
Date: December 11, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh yay! I just read through all your comments and I'm pleased to know I wasn't the only one in tears. I think it held up even better after knowing who was actually at the table. I was able to notice this:
She tilts her head in concentration. It is a familiar gesture, and his heart floods with contentment that warms away the winter chill. As though sensing the change in temperature, she lifts her head and sees him there. She smiles, and it is his smile.
Oh! You meant it was literally his smile! And the head tilt is familiar because its her mom's! Niiiiiice. [/Kevin]
Author's Response: I'm sly, what can I say? Heh. I was pleased that others shared your reaction to this, too! There's just something about the idea that they're going to be able to see each other in their kids- it always stops me short to notice my wee lass doing something that reminds me of her Daddy. Thank you for your beta help and for taking the time to re-read and comment here (you know I love comments!).