Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed
Date: January 01, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Boys' Night Out
You have such a wonderful way of writing perfect little details. I love the idea of Darryl trying to help Roy get over Pam and every one of Roy's flashbacks was so realistic,
This broke my heart: He could tell by her voice that he woke her up, but within half an hour she was there, her hair thrown into a sloppy ponytail, her eyes red from either lack of sleep or tears. He cried in her car the whole way back to their, no, his, apartment, and begged her to stay the night with him. He could see her hesitate, but then she helped him into bed, took off his clothes; she even sat next to him and wiped his face with a cold washcloth and told him to sleep. By the time he woke up the next morning, she was gone.
So beautiful and sad, especially Pam not having his gift with her when she left work. I'm glad Roy decides to give in to the dance after all.
Wonderful, as your work always is!
Author's Response: Awwww, you always leave the sweetest reviews! Thank you for the feedback, when I sat down to write about Roy, I found he was a hard one to get in, head-wise...so I'm so glad that his flashbacks seemed realistic. Thank you thank you thank you. :)