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Great writing once again! Couldn't help but chuckle at "Mom threatened that if we… fornicate under her roof she’d castrate me" and Pam's riding comment! Great mix of tenderness and humour throughout

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This was really sweet. I like the Karen/Pam friend dynamic. The way you used Karen's go getter attitude for her to help Jim and Pam get their stuff together was great! It was a nice glimpse into Karen/Danny, we don't often read that and I think they would be good together.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, including the random pairing that came to me somehow. 

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So basically if it was a real ghost, Jim is a major wuss and needs his pregnant wife to save him!

The cute fluffy goodness has made me feel much better after the heartache of Marley.

Wonderful writing as always, my love

Author's Response:

Oh absolute wuss. I'd love to see that haha

See, this fic had a purpose. So I'm sorry about the other, but hope this helped

Thanks so much! 

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Hahaha I loved this! Betsy is everyone's mum! Worrying over nothing and still trying to feed everyone including Jim's "one night stand".

I neeeeeed to know what the message he deleted said!

I prayed there would be more, that's why I didn't use my Jellies all in one go!

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Welcome to MTT and congrats on your first fic!

I'm a big fan of angst so this was a great read.

I really like your writing style and hope to see more from you :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words, my dear friend! If it wasn’t for all the encouragement I have gotten from you and the others I do not know that I would have ever tried to do something such as this. I am glad I did. 

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OH MY GOSH IRWT!!! You just always deliver don't you!

The excitement Pam felt to tell Jim gives off the same vibes as your excitement to tell us who your person was!

I love how you write Jim in your fics, he is always such a sweetie but at the same time strong and manly.

This was amazing and you've put us all to shame getting this done so quickly! Just wonderful - no other words!

Author's Response: Thank you, my dear! I’m so glad that I have all of you to cheer me on and just because this was YB’s secret Santa consider it a present to all of you as well! 

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Amazing! You had me holding my breath at times, throughout! I was rooting for them to break the barriers of their friendship but it wasn't meant to be on this occasion! You write their friendship so wonderfully and can totally imagine all the characters just as they should be.

Poor Pam struggling to make something for Roy and Phyllis having to rescue her. I'm sure whatever it was the Roy made her wouldn't have met the original scarf's standard either way.

Loved it, good job!

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Written really well and can totally believe this is how the start of their relationship could have been. The want to be more & cross boundaries but the timidity of finally getting there or going too far, too soon and the ghosts of their past still haunting.

Loved it, thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! And yes, timidity is a really good way of putting it, they're both eager for more but unsure of how to get there. That's a really nice way to sum it up! Thank you for such a thoughtful comment. :)

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This was the cutest thing! I was holding my breath through each chapter waiting for something to prompt Pam's voice and it was so bitter sweet for it to happen when it did. I'm so glad you gave us closure in the final chapter. What a beautiful story and meaning behind it. Have all the jellies

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Thank you so much for adding that epilogue because chapter 4 just KILLEDDDD me, so heartbreaking!! I was mentally screaming throughout this, so much they needed to say but in true Jam fashion, they once again skirted around their feelings. UGH! The ending completely made up for it, so sweet and relatable for every couple. I'm happy they had the comfort with each other in the end to run through their past and air it out. Great story, thank you!

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HAHA Amazing! Michael's fanfic was genius! I love that the members of the office found the fics about themselves "It's creative genius!" but I've never thought about the fact that the cast could ever stumble across the fanfics written about them! *cringe*

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Oh, this was wonderful!

You wrote everyone so believably, giving the feeling that it could well have been filmed as an alternate ending. This is the way this episode SHOULD have happened!

Love a fixer fic when they are done well and this was just that!

Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad it felt believable, I didn't want to stray too far... I may be biased but I would have much enjoyed this ending! 

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I love this already! The idea of a modern day teen Jam is amazing! Already need Roy out of the picture with the bits of info on him we have so far! Pam can do better! Her being flustered by Jim was all kinda of funny/adorable! You've rocked this so far, can't wait for more! Xx

Author's Response: Thank you! So much fun to write a modern teen Jam and put them through the highs and lows of college life... even though it includes Roy!