Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1
Date: July 15, 2023
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So beautiful.
I am not a mother myself, but Betsy’s mindset during these times rang true to me. I read enough books and fanfics, watch enough movies, and talk or listen to enough mothers (including my mother), so this makes a lot of sense to me. I have seen and heard similar feelings from real-life and fictional mothers alike. Also, you’re a mother yourself, which is the best because writers write what they know, and it shines through your writing here. Even though it hurt a bit to see Betsy not liking Pam at some points but it make sense. From her perspective, she’s the girl that toyed with her baby’s feelings and hurt him—loved that she ended up loving Pam, which I also see. She feels like she’s the missing puzzle piece to their family. And the magical ingredient. I love the comparison to the coconut flour in the cookies. It must be rough but also joyous to be a mother.
Amazing story! I do wonder if she ever met Karen and did she knew if she didn’t really fit in the family? I imagine so.
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you - you brought me back to when I wrote this one and it was a true mix of personal experiences swirled in with my Jam obsession. I appreciate so much your review and that you could feel the mother in me in the writing.
To answer your question...as a mom, I think Betsy would come around to Karen too. Karen's biggest fault was not seeing the signs, but really she wasn't a terrible person, she just clung a little too tight. And Jim was a bit unfair to her, using her as a shield. Plus, Betsy would not have any of the ill feelings about Karen having hurt her baby. Maybe in time she would see they weren't truly compatible and struggle with liking Karen, but maybe not for her son... but that's a whole other fan fic for someone else to write.
Thanks again for your review.