A Toby story. Set on the night of "Cocktails". Mini spoiler for Cocktails. Thanks to Rayne for the idea of a Toby fanfic.
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Yeay, Toby! I so wish this would happen.....I mean come ON....if someone has to be the Jim/Pam Cupid, TOBY would totally be a rockin' choice!
I'd feel so much better if this is how it was actually going to play out.....nice job on your first fic. Sometimes, the really romantic ones lose the characters, but this one made me feel the LOVE and made me know it was Pam and Jim in there....Yeay!
Author's Response: Hey thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. See ya over on TWoP!
AAAAAAAAAAARGH! Don't stop there! I love what you've done so far, please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on it.
Oh, my goodness! Gittin FREAKY in the Applebees parking lot.....awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks. I have to admit to being a little bit pleased with myself when I thought of the Applebees idea.
Oh, I loves me a sassy Pam! Yeay for that! More, please!
Author's Response: thanks yous!!! more coming!
Oh, HELL no.
Hot, hot, hot.....but it makes me want to beat Jim senseless. Although, I don't know if that is possible, seeing as he CLEARLY HAS NO SENSE already. Arrrrgh!
You spend your days watching other people fumble over themselves and wade through life without having to actually live your own.
Response to the Documentary Crew challenge!
I.
Love.
This.
<blows kisses>
Thank.
You!
For serious!
Awesome. I love all the hidden stuff about Kevin, who is kind of a cross between James Bond and the Pillsbury Doughboy...You really explored it well.....Great job!
OMG. I'd be shocked at Jim/CFO slash being written in my honor....but, come ON, this is so awesome, it's like the greatest pick me up (TWSS) EVER!
Plus we have confirmation that Karen is a) psycho AND b) a ho. What more could you ask?
So...Roy wanted to hook up with Pam in order to make Karen jealous?
I LOVE IT. Very original.
Oh, excellent....naughty workday hijinx......And the best of all the naughty has GOT to be Dwight and Angela, who are just so perfect in there bizarre perversity......Yeay!
Author's Response: So happy you liked it, as your saucy comment about an orgy was the inspiration!
The documentary company needs a little help to finalize a distribution deal, so the head of the camera crew decides to recruit a mole.MoreMOREMore! This is so much fun! I feel a new addiction coming on........
Author's Response: I didn't mean for you to become an addict.
Toby, you worry too much, and that is why you are going to die alone under a bridge.
I love you, Swedge.
Yes! Yes! The grape soda is key to the existance of OldeSchoole! Jim! Roll up those sleeves, baby!
Dawesome story, by the way....You really captured the metaphysical significance of grape soda......Yeay!
Must....resist....urge...to...smack....fictional....characters......
I so wish that this chapter wasn't in character....but it IS.
Pam Patch....Dawesome. I really like this so far....
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks. I really liked that phrase, it was ust a random thought I had.
Thanks for the review. more will be posted tomorrow hopefully
Before, during, after (peas, waffles.) Post-Cocktails...but no fighting.Oh, sweet merciful god of fanfic. This is beautiful....mmmmmmmmmm YES! Scary, and angsty and romantic and hot. Perfect.
Author's Response: Wow, Maybe Once...all those things? I am cyber blushing! Thank you so much - posting steamy stuff makes me nervous, so I really appreciate it.
he notices that she didn't do the laundry today. There are no clean towels. He makes a note to do it after dinner, without telling her.
This is totally the hottest thing I've ever read in a fanfic. Does that reveal too much about me being an old married lady?
Great job....This truly could be Jim's future, totally in character, but....all growed up.
Aw....I love it when Jan relaxes and admits that she has a Jones for Michael......very sweet...
Author's Response: Thanks!
This is my take on Bad, Bad Office Fic.
It's very, very bad. Like, 11 year old bad.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. I make no money.
“I’ll totally be pregnant in the next chapter!” Jim smiled down at her.
This line is extra delicious because it seems like JIM is the one saying it.....Heheh. EXCELLENT bad! fic! Total crack up. I salute you!
A short example of the type of literary masterpiece that suits the new "Bad Fanfic" challenge. Please enjoy the glory of this great work of art. THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!
Disclaimer - I didn't write this... my dog did. He may own the Office and all it's characters. If he does, he's not sharing it with me.
Ah, Pam as an oversexed film noir private dick!
Which, is, of course EXACTLY what she said.
Awesomely bad. And bizarre. Love.
Originally an entry into the Bad Fanfic Challenge but it grew a life of its own.
We enter the scene as Karen is smothering Jim with her multiple tentacles of boringness.
And, from there, it just gets funnier. Yeay, Swedge!
Oh, delicious.
This is so horribly bad that it's deeeeeelightful! I less-than-three you, Swedgie-poo.
I hope this realization comes before they are married....you got the characters really well!
Author's Response: thanks so much I really appreciate it!
Dawesome. I love the usage of Jim's mind powers. I only wish he had also used them to make the clothing fly off Pam's body. Also, I wonder who karen's new tall lay is.....
Nicely/badly done!
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