Answering a story idea from Klutzy Girl on the message board - the documentary airs and Jim watches season 3.Wonderful story from beginning to end. I feel like I took the journey right along with them. Thanks you so much for this gift.
I feel bad that I enjoy reliving some of that angst. It's so nice they can tell each other what really was going on instead of the version that was inside their heads at the time. It mad me so sad to think Pam thought Jim hated her.
I am so thrilled this will be longer than 2 chapters.
I have to read each chapter two or three times before I can review. I want to enjoy it to the fullest and not miss anything. They both kill me. What they are going through and what these memories bring back for both of them. TI don't have the words to really say how much I love this one.:)
Author's Response: Wow, that's a huge compliment thank you SO much! I'm really honored that something I write is worthy of a re-read! Thank you :)
Sorry for your bad week and thank you for a quick update. Glad it's helping a little. I honestly love some angst between these two. I cannot wait to see how Jim expains this one. I adore this one!
Author's Response: Thanks, KH! Sorry for the delay in review reply! I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think, and I'm happy to see you enjoyed this story. I hope the conclusion is enjoyable. :)
I'm embarrassed to say how many times I have check for a new update with this story. I hope you are working on the next chapter.:)
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay :) I have the next chapter almost done, the storm madness got in the way and knocked me out of writing this story a little bit. Hoping to get back to it tonight or tomorrow. :) xx
Once again I was practically not breathing while reading some of this. I honestly can't tell you how much I love this story. You even made me change my mind about the butt smack.:) Thank You!!
Author's Response: That's awesome! I know at first I was iffy about the butt smack, but I've since convinced myself that it's okay. Especially with the way he's looking at her afterwards. I wish someone looked at me that way. Thank YOU for sticking with this story I really appreciate it! :)
So great to read a confident Pam. Couldn't help but smile with this one and the thought of Pam gently putting Karen in her place. Nice start to my day. Hope you have more ideas coming soon.
Not to bleak at all. A perfect insight to more of their conversation and thoughts after Pam's big confession. I am so happy to have this to look forward to.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad my interpretation of what happened after Pam's speech rang true for someone.
I'm glad that came from somewhere. It was so sweet and so Jim to be supportive of her. Nice little fill in of what Pam was thinking before she came home. More of those please.
So happy to hear Pam say those words to Roy! I can't wait to hear his reaction, and see where this is headed.
Season 8 post episode one shots. Like "Harmony" only, they're Season 8. NOW COMPLETE.My sincere apology for not reviewing more often on this. I have loved each and every update. The latest one really got to me. The thought of them really having a health scare just brought their deep love to the surface again. I love having this couple to escape the real world with. Thank you for making that such a pleasure.
Author's Response: Thanks, KH, it's such a relief to know that you've still enjoying these one shots. I'm always worried that the drop off means I'm not entertaining everyone with these or that they're getting repetitive. I definitely took away the same thing from the episode, that this scare just made them stop for a minute and realize that they're not invincible. I'm happy to see that you enjoyed it! Thanks so much! :)
My advise to you is definitely watch more old episodes. I'm sorry I have been lapse in reviewing your updates. Each one is a bonus for me and how you seem to cature the true essence of our couple. This one especially was great. Now words were needed for Jim to see something was off with Pam. You give me a long deleted scene with all of your updates of the Jim and Pam that I long to see on screen. Thank you so much!
Author's Response: I love watching old episodes. The one that got me started on this wasn't even Valentine's Day from season 2, it was actually the scene with them on the roof with pizza in Dunder Mifflin Infinity. I don't know why, but they just seemed so at ease with each other and I let my mind wander from there. I actually wrote the entire thing on my iPhone. Crazy right? It happened that fast this time lol Thanks so much for the lovely review, I'm trying to make these a little like deleted scenes, so I'm happy that it's working out that way! :) Thanks!
You make everything o.k. again. Thank you again for filling in the gaps that the show can't seem to do anymore. Simply beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy that you liked this and thought it filled in the gaps. I think that they still have their solid friendship where they do silly little things like betting on stuff like that. I hope once Jenna comes back that they'll be able to do more with them. Glad you enjoyed these, thanks so much for all of the support, I really appreciate it!
Although I didn't watch Thursday's show I loved this chapter. I felt bad for Pam and the day she had, but was happy Jim came home understanding and was ready to help out.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you liked the chapter, without having watched the episode. I really liked it, and while I missed seeing Pam, I thought they did a good job of incorporating the whole cast. Yeah, in my mind, while he'd rather not have to deal with a mess to clean up and screaming children, it comes with the territory and I think Jim's the kind of guy that would readily help out his wife with things. :) Thanks, and hope you'll enjoy the next one too!
I have to say you just made this episode a lot better for me. I liked that you gave them a softer side to their day. Love it and keep it goiing!
So happy you are going to do this again. Great start! Any insight into this couple is always a treat. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's fun imagining things they do after work together. Glad you're liking these! :)
I am so sorry for the elay in reviewing this chapte. Of course I loved it! I like the flow you create in each chapter, easy and fun to read. I can't wait to see what you have each week.:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Working on the new one shot today. Happy you liked this one, thanks for the lovely compliment. :)
It took me 3 days to finish this story without any interruptions. It was worth it. I loved everyones thoughts and feelings. I am thankful you took the time to give us this special gift.:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you were finally able to read it uninterrupted! I have to give the credit to Nancy for the idea of different perspectives, and it fit in so well with the holiday theme. I try to avoid it being cheesy but sometimes it happens. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. I really had fun writing it. Hoping I'll be inspired again after tonight's episode. Thank you so much :)
Thank you for giving this episode a better spin than the writers. I really didn't like that Jim went on that trip but you made it better. Love your take and additions to each week.:)
Author's Response: Aw, you're welcome. I did not like the episode at all, so I'm really surprised I was able to get this one shot written. I'm happy you're enjoying these too! Thanks so much for the feedback, it really means a lot! Not many people are saying much about these so I'm wondering if I"ll continue, but I'm so thrilled to know you've liked them thus far. :)
I look forward to your take on each episode, but understand if you are done. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for each word you gave us. You brought an insight to our favorite couple that the show doesn't. I will miss this more than you know.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this, it will be tough to watch these go, but I don't think there's a new clever way to do them without being redundant. But if I'm inspired, I'll definitely come back to it. I'll miss writing, but I think my writing till is empty. Who knows, maybe one day it'll come back to me. I appreciate all of the kind support you've given me through out the years. It's been a lot of fun. Thanks so much :)
You made me almost cry with this latest update. My displeasure with the show is no secret and then reading this absoultely wonderful scenerio made me so sentimental for the JAM that I love so much. Thank you for keeping them alive with this story. I may not be tuning in on Thursdays but look forward to your take each week.
So adorable, I remember the days my boys thought I was "The One". Such sweet memories.
Author's Response: Aw... cute! :) Whenever you mention your boys on the boards, they always sound like such good kids (I say "kids" even though I think at least one is around my age hehe).
Thanks for the comment!!
Oh I really liked this one. It felt like feeling anyone would have given the circumstance. If we were all so lucky to have a Jim.:)
This has me more than interested. This is so different than anything I've read and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad this caught your eye. This is different from anything I've written. I wrote the outline for this fic about 7 months ago and I have been slowly putting the chapters together. Hopefully it will keep you in the edge of your seat! Thanks for reading.
You are killing me (in a good way) with this one. I don't blame Pam, but I am definitely worried this might be too much for me. LOVE IT!
Author's Response: PLEASE STAY WITH ME!! There will be a lot of twists and turns, but hopefully it won't be too much and you'll still like it. Thanks for reading!
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