1 [Report This]Date: January 03, 2021 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Considering that I’m guessing we might ultimately see Roy more as “bonkers” than “guy who goes for what he wants”, it’s interesting to see this chapter play out – the lines between romantic lead tropes and stalking behavior are not as clear as they should be. Stupid society.
Also on the same lines, I liked the choice to give us Roy’s inner monologue here – not something you normally get in this type of story. We get to see HIS perspective on his overwhelming behavior – that he’s aware he’s maybe a little too much, and that it’s coming from a place of insecurity that produces a certain amount of obsessive re-analysis of what he’s been doing. You’ve made him feel like a serious option for Pam here, complete with some crucial pieces of shared history.
Date: October 07, 2020 10:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Grrrr, why does this Roy have to be a good guy. At least at this point. Still, there was the moment of hesitency when Roy showed up. And of course Singer still doesn't like Roy.
Also grr, Pam and Roy are getting on good. Blah.
Jim's not in the best headspace either. I'm sure it's not going to be any better when Pam and Roy show up.
Great writing to bring out all those feelings.
1 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2020 04:10 am Title: Chapter 3
Aly! Way to leave us on a cliffhanger!
I can’t make sense of Roy here, I have no idea if he’s genuine or not. He really seems to be a bit of a mystery... Pam’s mixed feelings aren’t helping.
I feel for Jim though! I hope he finds some courage!