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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2020 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 7

Rough start to this for Pam - between Stanley's comment (come on, Stanley, be aware of your surroundings and who you're talking to) and Karen's bullying, it's a tough day.

I really like the choice to have Pam get the chance to take care of Jim for a change - both for giving her at least a little time in her comfort zone and for helping even out that relationship a touch. And both him finally asking her about her sleeping in his bed and the cheek kiss were very sweet.

Good lord, your version of Karen is unpleasant. Like, forget accepting that Jim isn't into you - you really think that suggesting Pam be fired is going to help your cause? Because he definitely has SOME affection for her. Utica can have you.

I appreciate you embracing the sheer awfulness of Ryan, though.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2020 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Alright, so setting the scene with typical office chaos with Michael there. Your Michael came through really well. He seemed very in character. Karen is developing into a right proper villain here. Though she's more than showing her hand here. Might as well put up a flag that says "I Hate Pam," on her desk. Which would cause her to self-sabotage her goal of wanting to be with Jim.

Still feeling for Pam with the memories of Roy. However she's able to move past them a lot quicker now. Now that Jim is even more in her life and she wants to be in that relationship with him.

Very sweet of her to come over after work. I'm sure Jim doesn't mind in the slightest. I also love that of her own volition she stays the night.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2020 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 7

Karen is now starting to give me the creeps.
Even if Pam didn’t work at DM that doesn’t mean Jim would go for Karen. Also Pam is pretty much the only real reason Jim even stayed there.
How did others in the office find out that Roy had
been abusing Pam?
It was good to see Michael defend Pam’s job against Karen.
Pam is the Money Penny of the office.
What’s going on with Roy’s case?
Please update soon!
I’ve been really missing this story.

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