1 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2021 04:30 am Title: It Felt Far
Oof, this was painful to read. And brilliantly written. I feel like this bit sums up so much of season 3 so well:
‘But then the awkward silence creeps in and they’re stuttering, and they’ve never had trouble just talking before. The past is now haunting him, the future terrifies him, and the right now feels suffocating.’
And then the ending is so bittersweet - poor Jim. This was so good!
1 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2021 08:11 pm Title: It Felt Far
Hi, I’d like the other eleven chapters immediately, thank you!
Date: July 21, 2021 07:34 pm Title: It Felt Far
UGH EVEN MORE ANGST!!!!!!!!!
But I love this angst! Please keep it going! I love this scene in the show, and how they slip back into their banter so easily, regardless of how hurt they both are.
You captured this scene perfectly!
1 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2021 03:51 pm Title: It Felt Far
This is just a very well-done Jim POV on this conversation.
1 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2021 07:41 pm Title: It Felt Far
Oh if only Ryan hadn't come in when he did or if Pam had clarified things a bit more. You really got into the feelings of this one. Just for a moment they're them again. They laugh, they banter, it's fun. Of course it can't go any farther with everything still unsaid between them, but oh how we wish it could have. That's the feeling you captured really well with this one. Great job.
1 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2021 05:01 pm Title: It Felt Far
Poor Jim. Of course, I'm assuming that he'll still do all of S3 here...but this is very sweet.
1 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2021 03:33 pm Title: It Felt Far
This one made me happy and sad at the same time. Beautifully written though. :)
Date: July 13, 2021 03:13 pm Title: It Felt Far
The chapter title was enough for me to hurt, and then I read the chapter. Ouchyyyyy. Jim’s cautious, self-regulating enthusiasm at Pam’s responses to the phone call and to him are just spot on. I honestly didn’t even make the connection of them having a hard time talking until I read this chapter (although that’s probably because I try to forget season 3 ever happened.) Team Halpert, aly! You crushed it.