1 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2023 05:07 am Title: Shout It
This is so cute!! Loved it
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it!
1 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2023 11:08 am Title: Shout It
I ADORE that your father did that and you used it in your own story. That's so beautiful, and I'm obsessed with it. Also, falling in love with your partner when finding out you're having a baby, or when that baby comes out is something I will never forget. It truly couldn't have been more magical. Also..will every chapter end in the shower now? Because I'm living for it. Maube you should just call this: Soap lolol i love it!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! I actually have it in a few silly spaces in other stories. Some of Jim’s offhand comment in season 7 Valentines ‘we have a shower’ stuck in my head… but it is also one of the most vulnerable care tasks feelings that I adore. It shows trust and intimacy on more levels than just sex.
1 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2023 08:39 pm Title: Shout It
Awwww, that's adorable. Jim being so excited to be a dad and Pam just glowing about it all. And that he's going to be a dad with Pam. After all those years of heartache and angst they're really cemented together now. I adore how overwhelmed they are in this moment but are talking the time to enjoy it. Worries about various things will come later, but for now they're just together and it's great.
Author's Response: d84;a039;hoping to stay true to the canon sweetness of themd84;a039;
1 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2023 04:54 pm Title: Shout It
This was written with such heart!! I love your short sentence structure and your page breaks… just so perfect… like all of the things running through Jim and Pam’s minds at a thousand miles an hour at this incredible moment in their lives! You can just feel every ounce of happiness in their souls in the car ride home; can just feel Jim willing his energy through Pam’s belly to their “bundle of cells” to “grow little bit, grow”! I can also see them both thinking about going to the picnic being “both” but coming home being “all”.. what a crazy distinction!!! I love the distinct difference of him taking care of her in both stressful times (chapter 1) and joyous times (chapter 2) but still wanting to take care of her.
And what a sweet tribute to your dad.. how amazing to know how he reacted to the first idea of your being, too!!! Such pure and simple joy. Thanks for sharing something so person in this sweet Jam moment!
Author's Response:
You picked up every sweet piece I set down d84;a039;
I have a couple more moments rattling around in my brain, and I hope to get around to adding them!
There was nowhere else I could think of something personal being added 🥰
1 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2023 03:57 pm Title: Shout It
Oh this was so so cute. I loved how Jim was so excited here (and bless your dad too!!) but also so protective of both his loves. Really liked this a lot!!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked! I am enjoying this little bit of mind candy d84;a039;