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Well, that's one heck of a way to start things off! Then of course hilarity ensues with following Michael around everywhere. The idea that he'd recreating the entire movie 100% tracks with him. Lots of fun to see it from Jim and Pam's point of view.


Ooh more revelations from the two of them. That they'd each want to be in each others time loop. Especially from Pam who makes no mention of Roy. That's huge!

Now the bar and an interesting drink order. And now we come to the 'oh holy crap!' moment. Wow, Jim being bold there. Forget everything I said in my last review about the timeline of this fic. Big shock to Pam there of course. To just hear it said loud and clear like that would of course be a lot. I don't blame her for wanting to get some space. Makes Jim a little despondent though.

However, we get to the park. Looks like Pam did a lot of soul searching in a very little bit of time. Though, maybe with reflection it wasn't as hard for her as she might have thought. Loved all the references to things like the teapot and when she first realized she liked him. Great use of all that backstory material. Then she goes ahead and has her own surprise for Jim. It really is amazing what something like 10 seconds of insane courage can do. Jim had his own moment in the bar. It then strengthens Pam to realize and also go for what she really wants. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Haha last review forgotten. Poof!

Glad you like this all - the comedy and the revelations!

Thanks so much for the review!