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Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2024 06:11 pm Title: Ending

I didn't see it coming in the first chapter, but I did fairly early in this one. Those two really are just destined for each other. I liked how they went about researching all the various ways to sell the dollhouse and guitar. Then when the gig was up on Christmas it had a good feeling of wholesome-ness. They realize how much they're alike and not mad at the other one. Looking forward to seeing where we go from here.

Author's Response:

I figured that you would. It was written with many clues. Did you know the story it mimics? That was hinted at in many ways from the very beginning?

But glad, you enjoyed their planning phases...I really leaned into what was happening in the season in that part. 

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

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