Date: June 14, 2007 10:14 am Title: Scrantonese Water Torture
Your changes are excellent! Master Cornell's print shop and lechery! The Andy part is my very favorite. And now we have James Halpert, Governor and Harvard man. Harvard - hast thou mayhap heard of this?
I was actually wondering about why Hathorne in your story wasn't Hawthorne...
Author's Response: Yeah, I mean, you've got to have Cornell in there somewhere...although I never had him sing a song or anything, hmmmm...
Date: June 14, 2007 07:29 am Title: Scrantonese Water Torture
Love the mistake of torture. Haha. Wow, that idea just makes me laugh!
I love how Judge Scott is afraid of Goody Scott.
Okay, actually, I know I mentioned it in my other review, but I love how all of it was Salemized. Its just so neat!
Rev. Dwight interrogating Tituba Kelly I am guessing would be a very interesting scene similar to Drug Testing. Wow, yeah, Drug Testing + Salem = hilarity.
Author's Response:
I had the chapter title, but no actual water torture, which my beta TooLateKev so graciously pointed out was kind of weird. So I added the stuff about how inept Michael and Dwight are, even if they really want to be good inquisitors.
yep! I wanted to making it Drug Testing part II...the early years, haha.
Date: June 14, 2007 05:57 am Title: Scrantonese Water Torture
And here I thought that "Tobias" was a sly attempt to crossove, if ever so briefly, to Arrested Development! :D Hey, I am still loving this story. What an original concept! But then, I love crossover and alternate universe stories like this. (I have a friend named HalloweenJack138 at ff.net who writes stuff like this, and it's good as well.)
So yes, I am now off to read the next chapter! (Oh, and Michael Scott's ancestor going to Harvard? Brilliant. Probably the last member of the Scott family to attend college, but still...)