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Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2010 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 13

ooohh come on you have to finish this story!!!!!!! it too good to not having an ending!!! pleaseeee!!!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 13

Uh-oh.  Poor Jim...it hurts me to see his heart broken like that...

Reviewer: missmargaret Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 02:20 am Title: Chapter 8

He wanted Michael to be there for his first time.  

I can't EVEN stop laughing about this!! Soooo funny and so completely Dwight!

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 13

So glad you are back with another chapter. I love this story and will take any chapter when they come. Nice chapter showing Pam being conflicted. But I really felt bad for Jim when she sent him and Dwight away. Hope you do continue.

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

OMG....Dwight doing the Baywatch run. Poking out my mind's eye right now.

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'd kill to see a rendition of her drawing. *sigh*

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 5

Kevin, you sneaky bastard....heh

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

Very believable and it's about time, even if it's only fictitiously, someone put Packer in his place!

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 11:58 am Title: Chapter 3

You're freakin' hilarious.

Reviewer: officefreak Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh.....no Roy! I smell JAM!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, you've got to update soon or I'M going to bust! I literally check this site everyday to see if you've added a chapter. I really love this story, it's so sweet and probably one of the more realistic fanfics out there.

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 02:28 am Title: Chapter 12

That chicken fight was just about the funniest damn thing I have ever read!!! And this part:

“Oh dear God,” Dwight said.

Soooo in character! I could see his face and I could not, for the life of me, stop laughing! Please continue soon! It's a happy day when you update! =)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 12

God, I hope I don't start picturing Chinfaces! Anyway, this was a super-fun chapter up until the end, which was sobering. I think we all needed that reminder that things can't go so easily for these two! But I have faith. They will absolutely find a way to prevail!

Reviewer: kitesflyhigher Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 12

Aw poor Pam.  Damn Roy and his guilt trips!  And yay for Jim and Pam cuteness!
My favorite part: "'Oh dear God,' Dwight said."
That was the funniest thing ever.  And I agree with the chinface thing, it's very hard to stop.
Please update soon, I can't wait for more Jam.

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 12

Dangit! Roy has to go and be all attentive and screw things up for JAM. Nincompoop!

Hee. But seriously. Great story. I can't wait to read what happens next. Update soon, please! 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 12

I like your analogy of oil and water. My spelling is probably wrong but you know what I meant.

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 12

Floating helplessly in the water was a bright red piece of fabric, the label Speedo displayed prominently in white. That thud you jut heard was me, hitting the floor. Brilliant.

Reviewer: FancyNewBeesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 12

Hahah I knew someone's bathing suit was going to come off in that scuffle! Very funny. And Jim's drunken chin-face thing was great. Aw I would love to see Jim and Pam drunk together on the show! The angst is good - Pam needed some reality to force her to really own up to what is going between her and Jim in this story! I'm glad to see that JAM will prevail, though. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 12

So true!
Chinface IS the worst disease.
and once you see it you just can't stop laughing.
It makes people think you're a drunk.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 12

This story = crack.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2007 11:25 am Title: Chapter 12

ok, the chinface thing is creeping me out -- but in a good way.  You know, like Michael Scott is annoying.  In a good way.

Reviewer: FancyNewBeesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 07:47 am Title: Chapter 6

*Sigh* Great story! Your writing of everyone interacting outside the office is hilarious, and with this chapter, you are proving to be equally adept at yummy JAMmy goodness. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love how Jim reacted(in his head) to Pam in a bikini.  This line was great:

"This was a little tough however, seing as all his brain could seem to think was: Guh.  Pam… bikini.  Boobs.  Skin. Soft.  Love."

I love how they are just so cute and adorable.  Good stuff. 



Author's Response: Haha, I have to credit that little bit of awesomeness to GreenFish.  It's pretty much the best thing ever.

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 11

OMG this is soo funny. Especially hearing the drunk angela....HEATHENSS!!!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 06:38 am Title: Chapter 11

So glad  you updated and  what a funny chapter. I love Angela.

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