10 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2007 04:27 pm Title: The reception
Oh, this is a disturbing concept. But very, very good. I really believe that Pam would feel "saved" by Roy here, and would backslide into his arms. And it's a perfect testament to what's really going on now between Jim/Pam/Karen, all the things that are seen by them but none of them knows the real truth. Fabulous job!
Author's Response: Yeah, it freaked me out when the idea came to me and I had to write it out of my system. I don't want it to happen! Thank you. :)
Date: February 02, 2007 04:12 pm Title: The reception
Oh, I love this. Very true to the characters -- I can really see this happening. I love how you switch perspectives there at the end because it showed something about Pam and Jim's relationship -- no matter how much they know about each other, they do tend to read each other incorrectly a crapload of the time. Especially loved how in Pam's perspective Jim and Karen were having a deep, heartfelt conversation when really it was a quiet fight.
And Roy! Oh, Roy. He's so wrong for Pam and I wish he would just realize it, but in the meantime he's trying so hard and he's so sweet... I love knight-in-shining-armor Roy. Nice job with that.
Great job with all of this, actually! Very plausible. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't want it to happen- Pam going back to Roy, even temporarily, just leaves me cold and scared. But it seems so possible! Thanks again for an insightful review!