Date: February 09, 2007 11:37 am Title: The Dance
Yay, I was so glad to see this update. Great how you kept them so in character, even in this totally AU setting. I think what I like best about it is how it really captures Jim's incredible mix of being mega-sexy, yet so adorable and earnest too. Making him young really emphasizes that too. Can't wait for part 4...a real date?
Date: February 09, 2007 11:16 am Title: The Dance
more! more! more more more! right now!! i love AU! love it!! yaaaaaay
10 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2007 11:12 am Title: The Dance
so nice and *different* - but the same, you know? It's a nice thought that no matter who Pam and Jim were, they'd still be destined for each other. Too sappy? ;-)
Date: February 06, 2007 06:14 am Title: The Club
Wow. I'm dying for chap 3!
Date: February 05, 2007 01:57 pm Title: The Private Room
This is getting better and better! Can't wait to see what happens on their date :)
Date: February 05, 2007 12:02 pm Title: The Private Room
Love young innocent Jim
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 11:46 am Title: The Club
i am IN LOVE with this fic. i can't wait for more!
Date: February 05, 2007 11:35 am Title: The Private Room
Wow. I seriously think I just experienced spontaneous combustion. You built the, ahem, tension here so well. I am literally speechless and that's not a frequent occurence. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: February 05, 2007 11:28 am Title: The Club
Whoa.... that was so Amazing(the lap dance that is,well all of it, really) Wow...just Wow......I have no more words....except....You Rock !!....& MORE PLEASE.
Date: February 05, 2007 06:12 am Title: The Club
I was wondering when someone was gonna write a fic around that line. It was screaming for it. Looking forward to more.
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2007 03:58 am Title: The Club
“Her. That’s the one I want”, Jim breathed. - So hot.
Well this is one hell of an opening chapter. Jim + lapdance? Way too hot. I'm sure that if I took the time to write out a more thoughtful review - it would basically read something along the lines of: Hot, so hot. Hot and hot. Way hot. (Sad but true).
Date: February 04, 2007 05:35 pm Title: The Club
Jim getting a lapdance from Pam? Whoa....and continue this please and quickly!
Date: February 04, 2007 05:17 pm Title: The Club
Wow... That was so HOT....already. I can't wait for more...hurry PLEASE ;) !!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 04:02 pm Title: The Club
This is... amazing. I love this whole thing. I want more and I want it now, about as much as I want a lapdance from Pam. Which is to say a lot.
Date: February 04, 2007 03:14 pm Title: The Club
I love a good AU fic! Keep this going, I'm interested in seeing where you're going to take this.
Date: February 04, 2007 02:42 pm Title: The Club
You know, I really, really didn't think I'd like this, but I kind of do. I hope you'll keep it going.
Author's Response: Ha, yeah... I was having major doubts about how to get across Pam's innocence while having her be such a provocative character...but I think that there's a lot of potential to show maybe on a deeper level, the misunderstanding of adult entertainers.