10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2010 11:49 pm Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
YOUR ANDY IS FANTASTIC. and so are your other characterizations (oh, Stanley) but especially Andy. love this! :)
Date: February 11, 2007 01:57 pm Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
Here via scranton_times--this was just great! Great idea for a five things, really in character, awesome work.
Author's Response: Thanks, agate!
Date: February 10, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
LOL. These are brilliant. I particularly enjoyed these two things: Goldshlager (extra flakes) and "Ryan, what took you so long?"
Okay, seriously, the fact that you just knew that Dwight was the kind of person who would make a ridiculous request like that (and that awesome little subtle reference to the fight he "got drunk with his laser tag team"). That rocks. And, on the same token, that you took that hilarious Kelly line from The Secret and actually contextualized it. I am in love.
The Andy one was also eighty thousand times dawesome. I love Andy. I can't wait to see him come back.
Author's Response: I wish I could claim I was a genius for knowing what Dwight would order, but it's from a Dundies deleted scene. He orders Goldschlager (extra flakes), then Hot Sake, then Fosters in the large can, only they don't have any of those things at Chili's, so he settles for "chocolate shake, chocolate sprinkles". However, I will happily embrace the rest of your kind words! I love to hate Andy and have a new appreciation for him after trying to see inside his head. Thanks GreenFish!
Date: February 10, 2007 07:20 pm Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
I loved everyone in this story. You captured them all so well. Loved Kelly and Ryan on Feb.13th, loved Andy plying Karen with drinks and she's not any drunker...ha!
You need to do Pt. 2 with the women.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was going to mix women and men, but the boys just showed up and took charge. I would definitely like to try my hand at the ladies!
Date: February 10, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
Oh, this is FANTASTIC! Funny the whole way through, in delightfully different ways. I love Stanley's attention to Devon's work ethic, Dwight + laser tag + the VCR, silly string and emo Jim with his snowball, Ryan & Kelly: the early years, and ohmigod, ANDY. Hahahaha, not getting any drunker. "Ever heard of it?" And now I have to get a Boston Cream tomorrow, THANKS. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, kyrafic ! Jim is pretty emo, isn't he? I didn't spend too much time with him because it was kind of depressing. Yay for Boston Cream!
Date: February 10, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
Awesome! The Ryan one made me laugh out loud. I didn't realize until the end that it was that night. Everyone of these is great. Perfectly in character. Nice little insights into each of their heads.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, shan21!
Date: February 10, 2007 10:36 am Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
Your five things are so good, I wish you'd do 10. 20. I like how you end each on a single thought that sums each mood/character up (the ones for Andy and Dwight were especially good.) And Dwight drinking Goldschlager - never would have thought of that, but it's somehow the perfect detail.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks! I can't claim credit fo Dwight's drink of choice, though, it's what he tries to order in a deleted scene of the Dundies. Even though the human body can't digest metals, I think Dwight believes the Schrutes are exempt from such a law. Maybe there's some kind of metal-eating back story to that.
Date: February 10, 2007 09:11 am Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
You're rocking the 5 things lately!! Too funny!
Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks xoxoxo!
Date: February 10, 2007 08:17 am Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
Very nice! The voices were spot on. If I have to quibble with anything, it's that you have spoilers through the Producer's Cut of The Return.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I didn't even catch that. I haven't seen the Producer's Cut myself, I live in Canada, so I guess I just assumed it was common knowledge. I changed it on the summary. Sorry again!
Date: February 10, 2007 07:58 am Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
Hilarious! Your Andy voice was spot-on!
Author's Response: Thanks, he was my favourite to write. I must have really been inside his head, because that night I had a dream about him.
Date: February 10, 2007 05:32 am Title: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s
I know, some kind of beta I am. Hee. I just thought this story worked really well. Just great characterization all around and an interesting theme. I promise to be more of a bitch from now on. ;)
Author's Response: Hee. Deal.