Date: February 23, 2010 05:58 am Title: Pam
"So, she thought, this is how it feels to tell someone you love them and watch them walk away." Guh! good story
Date: June 28, 2009 03:13 pm Title: Pam
I was poking around today, looking at other people's reviews and came across this story. I really like the way the story moves progressively forward, but through different character's eyes. Nicely done!
So, how'd you end up doing in that Beowulf class?
10 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Pam
ok, so that was the cutest way to end this. Great job! I had so much fun reading all of this!
Date: February 15, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Karen
Poor, poor Karen. Watching her boyfriend fight over Pam, watching Pam comfort said BF, then finding out about Pam and Roy from Toby. Ouch. Yes, I agree - she has every right to be mad at Jim.
Date: February 15, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Pam
ah, happy. :)
Date: February 15, 2007 10:08 am Title: Pam
Here is the line that just crushed me: So, she thought, this is how it feels to tell someone you love them and watch them walk away.
And how could there not be fireworks if you are on a rooftop with Jim Halpert?
Date: February 15, 2007 09:54 am Title: Pam
Great story. I loved that the Jam conversatoins were simple, yet them.
8 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2007 08:45 am Title: Jim
So good so far. I love Jim standing up for Pam like that.
Date: February 15, 2007 08:36 am Title: Pam
AWWW . Last 3 dialouge lines = just made my day! All you fanfic writers are amazing! I loveedd it!! = )
Date: February 15, 2007 07:51 am Title: Pam
this was just great. And I loved the subtle ending--no "I love you so much" stuff. It's great :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 02:58 pm Title: Jim
I'm loving all of this - am I right that there's at least one more chapter???? Great Job on the characters.
Author's Response:
There will be exactly one more chapter, and it's proving to be sort of difficult to write-- but it will get done in the next couple of days. I promise!
Date: February 14, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Jim
eew beowulf. and i thought my lab report was bad. my nice happy lil fishes are nottin compared to eew beowulf
Date: February 14, 2007 11:28 am Title: Jim
the complete joy tingling around his earlobe -- hee! Jim's tingly earlobes! Nice image! Now why can't the show's writers give us something like this? There's a healthy dose of angst and drama, but at least a glimmer of Jam-hope... And tingly earlobes.
Date: February 14, 2007 09:30 am Title: Pam
Ah! Honesty between Jim and Pam! Shocking!
I like this. I love that he wants to kiss her when she expresses concern for Karen. It's messed up but entirely realistic.
(And Ughhhhh to Beowulf. You poor soul. My Shakespeare prof refuses to give me above a B- on my papers and then writes illegible comments so I have no idea how to improve)
Date: February 14, 2007 09:19 am Title: Karen
Ooh. Excellent last sentence. I also love this line:
not even stopping to say goodbye to Jim because she was so afraid he would ignore her.
It's just so sad. I really like Karen, I do. But this is just not a healthy relationship for her.
As for schoolwork, totally understandable. I should actually be writing one of three essays right now, but I saw that you updated and couldn't stay away!
Date: February 14, 2007 06:38 am Title: Roy
Fight! Fight! Fight! This was great. I love that Creed was the one to break it up - “Get the hell up, asshole".
Date: February 14, 2007 05:58 am Title: Karen
oh come on, i am ignoring school work to read it. you can ignore it to write/post.
but karen is right, she isn't in jims life!
Date: February 14, 2007 05:43 am Title: Karen
So great so great so great. I am completely in love with this story. I cannot wait to read the rest of it!
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2007 11:57 pm Title: Karen
I love this story. I love the intimacy that's beginning to redevlop between Pam and Jim. (I feel a little bit bad for Karen, except not really, but I do appreciate the chapters that you've written from her persepctive.) Please do update soon--this is such a great story. Thanks!
Date: February 13, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Roy
I quite loved the action-adventure portion! Jim just can't help himself, can he? And I love three-dimensional Roy. He so wants to be different, to be better, but he just falls back into his old ways.
I'm really excited for the smooshy stuff :)
Author's Response: Wow, you're quick! Thanks. I've never really written a guy fight before, so that was iffy for me. I appreciate the feedback :)
Date: February 12, 2007 10:43 am Title: Karen
I so hope Pam confronts Jim soon but I'm thinking all I am see is her confronting him in fanfic only. Continue the fantasy
Date: February 11, 2007 10:01 pm Title: Karen
Ooh, I was pleasantly surprised to find myself sympathetic to Karen. So, well done! I am looking forward to the new chapters!
9 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Karen
"She just hadn’t understood that she was competing with someone else all along." So true. Poor Karen. This was such a good chapter. You did a great job with Karen's thoughts.
Date: February 11, 2007 04:58 pm Title: Pam
OMG, there's more? Ooh, if only TVPam would have half the guts that FanFicPam has! Looking forward to chapter 2!
Date: February 11, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Karen
oh come on, you don't need the night off. sleep is over rated :). please continue soon!