Date: February 16, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay!!! I finally got around to reading this. (Midterms are over, thank god!)
I love this story. A couple of really funny moments in here that actually made me laugh out loud:
“Yep, are you done here?”
Why is Mark touching me?
Hehehe. I wish this had actually happened. Thanks for writing this because I really need a JAM pick-me-up with the stuff that's going on on the show right now.
Author's Response: Thanks shan21, sorry i didn't wait longer for you! I just wanted to post it so badly and next time you'll still be first on my list for beta! I'm glad you liked it! :)
8 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2007 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
First of all: how amazing is John Mayer? Seriously, if me and John Krasinski don't work out, I'm gonna have to call up John Mayer and see if he's interested. ;) Oh, and "Continuum" is by far Mayer's best album yet. I bought it the day it came out and I haven't stopped listening to it since. It's particularly good when you're writing, and this just proves it! LOL
I've always thought this song had echoes of Jim and Pam, and this story was so awesomely accurate of Jim's feelings when he woke up alone. The line "Wondering, was she really here?" made me tear up a bit, and then Jim crying... wow, poor Jim. The ending was lovely, by the way. "waking up is the best part" Aww! Loved it! Great job! Thanks for sharing this!
Date: February 14, 2007 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
A girl after my own heart using the Mayer lyrics. I loved how you did that and just managed to tie the story in very nicely! Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm just obessed with the new Mayer CD and the story just came to me while I was listening to it! I'm glad you liked it
9 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is so sweet. I am really glad you posted it. The song goes really well with the story. great job!
Date: February 14, 2007 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
i'm glad you decided to beta it :) it's much easier to read now, and i still love the story!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: February 14, 2007 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
don't be nervous. it's wonderful. my heart was aching when he thought it wasn't real. you did a great job of keeping up the suspense and emotion.
Date: February 14, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1
"Jim realizes that when you’re dreams become reality, that waking up is the best part." Awsome line (although you might want to change the "you're to your"). Really enjoyed this!
Author's Response: Did it, thanks for pointing it out! I had originally had the line as something else and forget to edit it. Thanks!
Date: February 14, 2007 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
So gorgeous and heartbreaking! I was ready to start crying with Jim. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thanks SixFlightsUp! I appreciate it!
Date: February 14, 2007 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
the begining reminds me of something. "sleep is my only escape. my dreams become nightmares when I awake"
ah, a nice valentine;s day treat. happy JAM. but anyways, glad the end was happier than the quote/beginning.
Author's Response: what is that quote from? It sounds familiar. Thanks for the review EmilyHalpert! I'm glad you enjoyed it!