9 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 10:21 pm Title: What have I done to deserve this?
Noooo! You better finish this or I'm coming after you! You really nailed all the characters' voices and the story seems really believable based on how it was set up from last week. And really, do I wish this would happen for real? Yes, yes I do.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really plan on trying to get this done tomorrow. I figure that if I treat it kind of like an "ImprovFic," it forces me to actually get these things done faster. And trust me, I want this for real, too. Not that I expect that Jim and Karen are going to break up this quickly, but if I was Karen, I would have dumped him a long time ago... that's a story for a different place, though...
Date: February 26, 2007 10:10 pm Title: What have I done to deserve this?
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Don't hurt Jim!!
Oh, this was just fantastic! Every scene was so realistic. I could see it happening on the show! Especially the Wake-n-Bacon and Michael's "coming out" announcement.
But such a crazy, amazing cliffhanger! Too cruel!
Author's Response:
Hee. It seemed like the right place to leave off. I hope to finish this tomorrow... but don't hold me to it. :o
Thanks for the review!!