Date: April 18, 2016 06:03 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Nope. No way in hell he'd leave after finally getting with Pam.
Date: February 18, 2009 05:40 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Wow, that was hot :D but I still think it's too out of character. I mean, Jim would never do that!
Date: June 16, 2008 07:39 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
that was one of the harshest, hottest JAM fics ever. seriously. good stuff.
8 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2008 11:43 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
my first review because WOW...that was fantastic! it actually made my heart ache. you have incredible talent. plus i am sucker for unhappy endings. great job!
Date: April 30, 2008 03:44 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Jim was harsh but somehow it is still really hot! Great story.
Date: April 14, 2008 01:31 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Good Smut with a side of asshole Jim. Great visuals! Can you do a another story with Pam being a User Bitch From Hell? Please? I like seeing different sides of these characters... and if they just happen to have hot steamy sex, well, good for us! Hubba-Hubba!
Date: December 06, 2007 07:15 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Wowi seriously did not expect that ending...Jim ending up with Karen after all THAT! Crazy stuff. But very original and real.
9 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 07:56 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Now that is just cold...after all the JAM love to see Jim leave Pam for Karen. So, I didn't really like that party of the story ;) I did like the way you started the story in particular - how it "happened" to Pam at different times. Nice!
Date: October 15, 2007 02:00 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
I think I've just marathon read about 15 of your fics and I'm utterly and completely hooked. Your writing is flawless and amazing.
This story broke me into a million tiny little pieces. It was just so... real. And heartbreaking. And as much as I love Jim and Pam together, I don't think you could have written a better ending. It's just perfect. I'm such a glutton for angsty punishment.
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2007 12:22 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
this is my favorite fic of all time. for any fandom. it's brutally realistic, and i deeply, deeply appreciate that.
Date: March 21, 2007 01:07 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Jim the ManWhore!!! That was a SHOCKING ending, I've never read of Jim being such an ass before . . . and yet for some strange reason it works . . . hmm . . . :)
Perhaps a chapter 2? We all know and love Jim the adorable, loyal knight he really is . . . this would be very interesting to see a fanfic where Jim's playing the both of them.
Great story, I loved this. Very well written as well which does not often happen I feel with smut. Excellent work. :)
Date: March 13, 2007 06:08 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
My soul. Crushed. Bruised. On the floor.
And yet at the same time I am completely amazed. SUCH beautiful writing, such great smut! Definitely favoriting now. THANK YOU!!! This deserves so many rereads...
Date: March 13, 2007 06:32 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Holy mother of god. That's a Jim we don't usually see! Wow, and SO hot. Yikes.
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2007 10:43 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Oh my, way to make me cry! I love angst so much, and this was just perfect.
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2007 09:40 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Oh God. That was amazing - intense, hot, and unbelievably painful. It seemed very real, to the show and to life. I suppsoe that's what makes it so "hurty" as another reviewer put it. And though it was horrible of Jim, it was not even remotely out of the scope of what we've seen his character do. And yet... ow. Thank you so much for writing this. It was a thrilling read.
9 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2007 08:41 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Holy shamoly! Reading this was like a punch in the gut- and as painful as that can be, sometimes I think those are the best kinds of fics :) Really REALLY well done.
8 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2007 08:41 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Welcome to smut ;)
The moment when Jim tells her he'll still be with Karen made this real, saved it from becoming the kind of Jim-and-Pam-get-it-on-and-all-is-groovy-the-end stuff the rest of us write.
Nice work :)
Date: March 12, 2007 12:32 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Oh. My. GOD that was hot.
Although I wanted to die a little at the end.
Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2007 12:24 am Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
I loved this!!! It can get so boring with the same plots over and over, and even when they are different, they're the same.
And as much as other people (and reluctantly me) are all about the Jam, I still find this so completely possible in the real world!!!
You for the win! (Also, Jim did totally warn her, so... Pam should've seen it coming.) ;)
If my MTT favoriting tool wasn't all wonky, I would totally favorite this. :)
Date: March 11, 2007 10:37 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
That was hot! But what a dog.....Jim just walks out afterwards?
Date: March 11, 2007 09:23 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Wow. So hot. But the end... so COLD, Jim!!! Just let it go to voice mail!
Really good.
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2007 09:20 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Umm can i just say this is the most amazing thing ever? Because it is. Amazing. It's so hurty and wonderful and oh - I wish I could pick out a few lines that I loved but I can't even. The whole thing just flows and is so...ah. Fantastic.
9 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2007 07:50 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Wow...beautifully painful. My heart just breaks for Pam. When he tells her he's still going to be with Karen after...and then just leaves. Wow...just wow.
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2007 07:42 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
Wow, that was like...running with scissors? Thrilling, then...not so much, when the threatened disaster comes to pass. Didn't think he really meant it about Karen, but...just, wow. Really good story!
Date: March 11, 2007 06:49 pm Title: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst
This was freaking hot, but the unhappy ending broke my heart.