1 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2021 10:26 am Title: Bubble Bath
This is the cutest thing I have ever seen.
1 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2018 11:57 am Title: Lost Time, Found
And DEFINITELY don't call it Frisco! Haha! Nice story PCC! It's so nice to visualize them together after ten years. And it's fun to picture them living in the Bay Area! :)
Author's Response: Thank you Clover! <3
1 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2017 12:31 pm Title: Lost Time, Found
Soulmates in any universe :D This was very sweet!
Author's Response: Of course. Thanks for reading<3
Date: June 28, 2017 07:29 am Title: Bubble Bath
Sure! (Sometimes I hesitate to go into detail. I'm slightly worried about offending if an author isn't interested in hearing that kind of feedback. And I'm still getting to know everyone here.) Anyway--the only formatting issue that I saw was that there were no spaces between paragraphs. I would just add those, and it would be much easier to read.
I also wanted to encourage you to keep writing, regardless of how short or long a fic might end up being. I've written and read fics of only 100 words, and they could be more amazing and compelling than 5,000-word fics. For me, it's about telling the story you want to tell, so I would still encourage you to write, even if the stories you want to tell are small glimpses into a day-in-the-life (I actually really love fics like that).
Hope that helps! I appreciate your attention to detail and pride in your work. :)
Author's Response: I will add those. I am a very new fanfic writer finding my legs so any advice/encouragement is very appreciated. Thank you.
Date: June 27, 2017 07:01 pm Title: Bubble Bath
Let us see. Your first story (excellent) is over 4000 words. This is not even 300.. My little brain is fogged.
Author's Response: I love these little moments, and I wanted to capture one, and this is what came out when the inspiration really hit, in my opinion it didn't need to be any longer. I usually don't plan stories, I get a small idea and write whatever comes to mind. I always appreciate reviews. I strive to make my writing better in any way I can. Thank you for reading <3
Date: June 17, 2017 07:53 am Title: Bubble Bath
Cute snapshot. Formatting issues aside, I enjoy reading domestic moments like this. :) Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you, I really enjoyed writing it. Could you expand on what you mean by formatting issues, I want to make everything nice to look at or accessible as possible. Thank you for reading and reviewing <3