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Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 04:43 pm Title: Thursday

Oh that was so good Sharky!  I had to catch up, reading the last two chapters.  I loved the line about Jim's look of lust at Pam's naked back.  Sigh.  AWESOME!

I'm droolin' here...I need more.  QUICK!



Author's Response: Thanks! I promise to start writing the last chapter soon.

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 11:39 am Title: Thursday

My love for this story... I cannot describe it, but I'm pretty sure it's illegal in 48 states.

I looooove Phyllis in this. If there was a mole, it would totally be her. 



Author's Response: I promise not to be a narc and tell on you. :)

Reviewer: lama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 11:05 am Title: Thursday

You really captured Phyllis in this chapter.  Excellent, excellent job.  I'm very curious how the date will go! 

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 11:00 am Title: Thursday

Yay! I love Phyllis the mole! So fun! Your Phyllis is spot on.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 10:43 am Title: Thursday

 "Bob Vance is my best friend," she said. "Who's yours?"

Yes, Jim.  Who's yours?

Silly boy.  Stop sitting alone at home getting drunk and do something!  Maybe if you're good, Phyllis will magically transport you to dinner with Pam....

Just speculatin'  It's all yours, Sharky, and I'm loving it!



Author's Response: It's Phyllis's date so who knows what she's going to do with it. I don't. ;)

Reviewer: molly_connelley Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 09:34 am Title: Thursday

I heart Phyllis. Yaaaay Phyllis. I can't wait until the dinner date... and how adorable is it when Phyllis calls her husband Bob Vance? It makes me all mushy inside. So... thanks for the mushy feelings... because it is so well-written and in-character, and I love it!

Author's Response: I love the fact that she totally would call him that too.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 09:26 am Title: Thursday

For someone who had no idea where Phyllis's next idea was going to come from, you did a damn fine job. I don't suppose Phyllis is going to convince Pam to wear that red dress to dinner tomorrow, is she?  Because that would be playing TOTALLY unfair.  ;-)

Looking forward to the next chapter! 



Author's Response: Well, why would Pam wear a red dress on Phyllis's date? ;)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 09:12 am Title: Thursday

Sharky, this is getting better and better, and I liked it to begin with, so... yeah, it's pretty good.

What kind of evil person am I that I love that Jim passed out drunk on his couch, pining for the gal he thinks he can't have?  (Worst sentence ever, BTW.) I even love your chapter notes. 

One nitpick - I think Phyllis's last name was Lapin, not Lupin.

If you don't watch it, your new chapters are going to cause as much ruckus as Squirrel and Girly-girl.  Yep, they are!

Awaiting more Mole, when you can...!



Author's Response: Acl! It totally is. Lupin is from Harry Potter, isn't he? I need to stop reading those books.

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 08:46 am Title: Thursday

Clever!  Both you AND Phyllis that is...

Author's Response: I'm going to tell my husband someone called me clever. He won't believe it. Thanks!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 08:44 am Title: Thursday

Yay Phyllis -- or should I say "Phyllisity"?  And dinner with Jim is the best prize.  Ever.


Author's Response: Everyone wants to have at least one dinner with Jim.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 08:43 am Title: Thursday

Jimbo and Phyllisity

That is hilarious.  

I love Phyllis so much.  I can just see the whole conversation about her date w/Jim.  Adorable.

And of course - her motivation for it all is something I am very much for....so yeah.  Totally loving every bit of this story. :)



Author's Response: Yeah, anything to keep Karen and Jim apart is a good thing.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 02:47 am Title: Wednesday

sharky, have I told you how much I love this story? Original, straight, and rather fluffy, if I do say so myself, because I know - I'm pretty certain, anyway - that there'll be a good, clean JAM ending, or at least the hope of one. ;) And I know you won't disappoint, because this chapter? Was amazzzinngg!! 

You'd gotten Kelly and Dwight down, by the way. Awesome. 



Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Kelly and Dwight are fun to write so I had to add them in.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:41 pm Title: Wednesday

Oooo! I wonder if Eric saw something exciting after Pam ran out! So excited to read Thursday!

Author's Response: No. That would have been a good idea but I didn't think of it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Wednesday

Nice, Sharky!  I await the next chapter (but patiently)!


Author's Response: It's being worked on as I speak!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Wednesday

Oh, Sharky, I'm loving this.  Dwight was so sweet and I'm glad Eric cheered up Phyllis.  Can't wait to see what happens on Thursday!



Author's Response: Yeah, Dwight definitely has his moments.

Reviewer: lama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 04:55 pm Title: Wednesday

Ooooh , what did Eric see?  I could totally picture Pam in the dress- and the scene with her and Dwight was incredibly touching.  Love it!

Author's Response: You know, I don't know what Eric saw. May have to think about that one...

Reviewer: justy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 01:03 pm Title: Wednesday

I do love this story. And thanks so much fo the "cliff notes" at the begining, I always find myself having to go back and read two chapters to remember what all is going on and what's happened and stuff, so thanks!

Karen should just give up now, lol.

And how sweet of Dwight, that literally made almost want to hug him. I also couldn't help but hear Kelly in my head "Fashion show, fashion show, fashion show at lunch! Fashion show, fashion show, fashion show at lunch!" When Phyllis suggested it.

I'm waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter! :D



Author's Response: It took me so long to post this next chapter, I thought the notes were in order. Thanks!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Wednesday

Love it!  I'm sure Phyllis will think of something!!  :-)


Author's Response: And then maybe she could tell me because I have no idea. ;)

Reviewer: aurorasmile Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 12:27 am Title: Tuesday

This story is so cute!  I'm loving it!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 03:33 pm Title: Tuesday

Ooooh this is so good!  Any chance you'll be updating soon?  Hint hint?

You've totally captured Phyllis in this- and I adore Phyllis- and I love that she's in love with Bob Vance.  I must stop gushing.

Can't wait to see where you take this next! 



Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you liked the new chapter!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 08:08 am Title: Tuesday

Ooooh, Phyllis. Devious! Crafty! Cunning!  My hero!


Author's Response: We do love Phyllis, don't we?

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15, 2007 05:56 am Title: Tuesday

This is such a fun and clever idea, Sharky! I can't wait to see where it goes next, and I love that you've made Phyllis the Jam-champion we all know that she wants to be! Keep it up, and I look forward to reading more of your story!  --C.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you liked the most recent chapter too.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Tuesday

Oh, I love this mole idea, and you're executing it so well! Very fun.

Author's Response: Thank mouse2002 for the awesome mole idea!

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 06:24 pm Title: Tuesday

Likin' it, likin' it!  Matchmaker Phyillis is great :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2007 06:04 pm Title: Tuesday

Ooh, this is very cute and fun so far! I love meddling-Phyllis.

Author's Response: Thanks!

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