1 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2025 03:49 am Title: Death First
Unfortunately this is all too realistic actually. But omg i didn't even realize this was the last chapter ðŸ˜
Date: January 17, 2025 10:12 pm Title: Death First
Dying to know the inscription ðŸ˜
1 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2025 08:33 pm Title: Safety First
No...and then ending it with those lyrics...my heart aches
1 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2025 08:25 pm Title: Safety First
1. Im so so sorry i Know it's not the point but Pam immediately inducing vomiting as soon as Jim said so was kinda comical pls our precious girl ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
2. She's so precious omg the visual of her just poking her belly button was kinda cute sorry am i weird for that
3. Wedding gifts!! Im so excited
Date: January 17, 2025 08:08 pm Title: Safety First
I get being concerned about your daughter but jimminy christmas man
Date: January 17, 2025 02:50 am Title: Freedom First
Oooohhhh i Love the meddling AHAHAH that was ADORABLE
Date: January 17, 2025 02:50 am Title: Freedom First
Oooohhhh i Love the meddling AHAHAH that was ADORABLE
1 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2025 06:21 pm Title: Freedom First
MY HEART IS BURSTING OH GOD
Date: January 16, 2025 05:47 pm Title: Freedom First
Damn that made me SO NERVOUS. The ending was so cute tho ðŸ˜
Date: January 16, 2025 05:32 pm Title: Freedom First
Should i be concerned that they noth keep getting lightheaded ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ not that it's not insanely cute but ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Also now im getting worried about how lucky they were at their marriage assignments UGH as a former YA fanatic, i know not to trust in good fortune too early but im open to more twists 🫣🫣 this story is seriously so so good omg
1 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2025 05:02 pm Title: Freedom First
A high speed heartbreak car chase OMG 😠maybe one of The worst (BEST) cases of misunderstanding ive ever read ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ im so glad for the twist because i thought for sure this was how you were gonna insert roy and karen
1 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2025 04:56 pm Title: Freedom First
Their middle names perfectly being the same letters as danger and mystery tying it so perfectly to the plot OMG all the little details are killing me this is seriously so good AND OMG WAS THAT A MARRIAGE ASSIGNMENT
Also Pam's drawing for Pete stopped me cold that was beautiful
1 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2025 04:36 pm Title: Freedom First
That last scene...OH MY GOD i was screaming too THE TENSION. and i adore how open Pam is here because of her inexperience(?) so she's actually much more forward here than in canon it's adorable
1 [Report This]Date: January 16, 2025 03:35 pm Title: Freedom First
This premise is sooo interesting omg and that last scene? So precious! Im so excited!!
Date: September 05, 2024 09:19 pm Title: Safety First
Very sweet this time around. I like how they're making plans to include each other's families in their lives. I'm sure it'll add in a lot more dynamics though. Very nice to see them enjoying a lazy Sunday morning together.
1 [Report This]Date: September 05, 2024 08:03 pm Title: Safety First
A nice way to show Pam's tender side here. Taking care of him after a night like that. She calmly chides him for being so hard on himself too. Pam felt like a very calming presence in this chapter and I loved reading it.
Date: November 27, 2023 11:32 am Title: Safety First
So that was a range of feelings for this chapter. Clearly there's some deeper issues going on with Jim that he just wants to numb out. Now I get it in this world and with him being an ally and all. He's probably been exposed to quite a bit. So yeah when his seeming source of life and connection goes away he just wants to check out.
Then when Pam comes back he's everywhere past gone. Very much an "in vino veritas" kind of moment with Drunk Jim saying some of the stuff he really wants to say. Though it also kinda felt like Jim was taking advantage of the situation and I'm not sure Pam has all the wherewithal to recognize it. It's not like anything felt forced, but when one is drunk and the other isn't, even in a committed relationship, for me at least, it feels questionable. So, we'll see what happens going forward.
Date: November 18, 2023 09:02 am Title: Safety First
I like this look into the hosting duties Jim performs. Kind of feels like another step for easing Pam into things as well. Giving her a code name, saying they're married prior to the actual thing.
Jenny was adorable and Jim was great with her. I also understand why Jane would be so hesitant. She's got a lot on her plate at the moment and in this world nothing's really safe. Though Jenny's whisper to Jim I'm sure was a tough pull on his heartstrings. Really glad Pam is there to help him now. Feels like he's needed a partner in crime for a while and he can share some of this burden a bit more easily.
1 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2023 07:06 pm Title: Safety First
Forget a bit of what I said last chapter. I mean if there's ever a time for the first declaration of love, I mean, that would be it. Very sensual and then tender afterwards.
Pam picking up the guitar and being so proud of herself is all sorts of adorable. And Jim comes in and it blows his socks off was great to see as well. They really are wonderful together in a space like this. Now of course because of the setting there's an underlying edge of tension to be sure, but at the same time it's great to see them like this as well.
1 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2023 06:58 pm Title: Safety First
Time to dive in with this one.
Well that got off to a rather quick start. Considering they're trying to be slow about things, I just wonder how long they're going to last. But I'm getting ahead of myself.
There's a feeling of canon in the opening here. Jim and Pam's biggest issues with each other, in my opinion, has always been lack of communication. I see that here. Jim not telling her about where things are located, them both still not telling each other they love the other one, things like that. Feels very in character for them.
Everything else was deliciously hot and descriptive.
Date: October 31, 2023 07:11 pm Title: Freedom First
And the shoe finally drops. Even without the detail, one can imagine what might have happened to generate that kind of response in her. The curtain shielding her eyes is finally gone. Yeah, not pleasant, but I also think it's a bit of a refining fire. Something that's burning away the slag which will leave a solid core of hardened steel in its place.
Jim taking care of her though is very sweet. Best thing is to just hold her and he does just that. Bravo. Looking forward to delving into the rest of the world for sure.
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2023 07:04 pm Title: Freedom First
Making out to "Princess Bride," excellent! Though interspersed with some of the realities they have to deal with which of course stretches over everything in this world.
Getting tipsy off whiskey and cokes is quite fun to watch as well. They're getting so in tune with each other and as I've said quite a few times before, it's wonderful to see. Methinks they'll need a bond as strong as iron in this world. Especially if Pam is going to become an Ally and what that might entail. Great to see it forming here.
Date: October 31, 2023 06:51 pm Title: Freedom First
Very cute Pam making dinner. Though that pales in comparison to the fire blazing between them. It's just amazing to see them falling in love like this. To be able to be together is just great to watch.
1 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2023 08:23 pm Title: Freedom First
Nice to have people in higher places. Always like David. He mostly seemed to always be looking out for the genuine well being of people. I'm also going to go ahead and headcannon that now in this universe Roy and Karen are assigned to each other (unless future reading says otherwise). As careful as one must be it's still kind of refreshing to see Dwight being so Dwight in this chapter. Very early season kind of Dwight too. Very much stuck up about the rules and telling everyone about the beet farm.
Delightful JAM banter too what with the post-it notes and such. Great fun to be had there for sure.
Date: October 30, 2023 07:51 pm Title: Freedom First
So for all the fact that they're adults there's this certain charm about them that neither of them has gone past first base at this point. Something they'll get to experience together so that's a nice thought. Still loving all the fun JAM-my flintiness with this one.