Reviews For Five Conversations
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Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 05:19 pm Title: Quarter-Anniversary

you had to say butter him a muffin didnt you?

 

you are very naughty! 



Author's Response: Yes, I did. My naughtiness trumps my good taste every time. Thanks, PamPongChamp!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Affliction with No Cure

These are even better than chocolate - wonderfully sweet and no calories!  Can't wait for #4 and #5.

Author's Response: Now, that's high praise! Glad you enjoyed the non-caloric experience, kaystar...thanks!

Reviewer: Sibilate Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 05:10 pm Title: Affliction with No Cure

Love the spice!  Chapter 4 - Naughty Nurse Pam...

 



Author's Response: Hmmm...actually chapter 4 is another thing altogether, but maybe a naughty nurse story someday? You never know. Thanks Sibilate!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 05:08 pm Title: Affliction with No Cure

Ahhh!  This was so freaking much fun!  Seriously, I haven't felt this gooey since watching Michael's Birthday. You make them so believable - just so in sync, so them, so hot.

Loved this - and would love, in all seriousness, just random glimpses like this for fifty more chapters. 



Author's Response: You know I like to do random glimpses (i.e., constructing a protracted plot...too lazy!)  I don't know about 50 more, but I can guarantee two. Thanks for all the feedback, girl7...I had far too much fun writing these.

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Vacation (Hold the Rice-a-Roni)

Good god, this is just like a gift that keeps on giving - seriously.  Again with the huge grin on my face.  I love these glimpses you're giving - again, it's those subtle little details you add that just make it for me (him swiveling the chair so she's facing him; him throwing his shirt at her).  And of course, the tone of the dialogue is spot-on.

Don't even get me started on the notion of Jim taking Pam to Europe...such a contrast to Roy and the Poconos.  Amazing.

Loved it, as usual.  I really would not mind if this went on for fifty chapters. 



Author's Response: Hee. Someday I may need to write one about their trip. Glad you liked Jim's Gypsy Rose Lee move...thanks again for squee-ing along with me!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 05:01 pm Title: Quarter-Anniversary

Okay, you.  I read this with the stupidest grin on my face - and it's still there.  Love, love, love the images you give us here: Jim walking into the kitchen with his tie in his hand (I find that image as hot as Marc Antony/James Purefoy in his eye liner), Pam then tying it for him (god, please let us see this just once on the show).... I could so clearly see Jim squinting as he thought over the first date issue (and I really love the way you allude to the Big Fight we're all hoping to see).  And the banter...god, the banter was so happy and hot and them.

As usual, bravo - now, I'm off to the next chapter....



Author's Response: I have to admit, I wrote these silly things with a stupid grin on my face too. Glad you thought it sounded like them...lots of dialogue is scary! Thanks!!! (Oh and, MA/JP...I'd still take JH/JK. Ties are much easier to manage than togas ; )

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 04:45 pm Title: Quarter-Anniversary

ahem, Miss Colette - I believe you promised FIVE conversations?  I have counted and read only three!! 

Don't tease us!! 



Author's Response: Two more are on their way...I swear I'll deliver. Stay tuned, mox.

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