Date: January 05, 2017 08:31 pm Title: Cyfaddef
This is truly great, well thought out, and very thorough. I think you have written Jim and Pam so perfectly. I just wish we had gotten that fourth chapter, I know it would have been amazing!
Date: February 26, 2008 02:38 pm Title: Cyfaddef
I almost missed this story -- so glad you updated it!
Looking forward to the finale!
Author's Response: :) Thank you... I know, it was a pretty ridiculous gap of time between updates. But I really appreciate that you stuck around, and I can promise, the final update won't take nearly as long! Thanks so much for reviewing - seriously, it means a lot. :)
8 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2008 09:13 pm Title: Aspiro
Finish it already!
Date: June 10, 2007 01:52 pm Title: Aspiro
That was beautiful! I'm all teary eyed now. I loved it! And I loved the pictures she drew....so sweet!
Date: May 30, 2007 09:57 am Title: Pravda
I love it from beginning to end. I wouldn't cry with some Jammy smut, but I think what you've written is terrific on it's own. Love, love, loooove it!
Date: March 27, 2007 09:08 pm Title: Aspiro
As Kelly would say ... Uh-mazing! Keep it going - i love the sketch of Jmi and Karen dancing but Jim looking at Pam - totally great. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: March 27, 2007 09:08 pm Title: Aspiro
As Kelly would say ... Uh-mazing! Keep it going - i love the sketch of Jmi and Karen dancing but Jim looking at Pam - totally great. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: March 22, 2007 03:11 pm Title: Aspiro
i think i am in love. i eagerly await more!
Author's Response: Haha thanks so much! I'm working on the next chapter... real life is just so mean! But I will hopefully have the next (possibly last?) chapter up soon! Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
Date: March 20, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Aspiro
Wow, Pam stepped up to the plate, big-time! I wish she would on the show!
I love the description of Jim - how did she NOT just jump him at that point? Bare-foot, sweatpants, T-shirt, yikes!
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Yeah, if they had John Krasinski dressed like that on the show... all of the women (and some of the men) would spontaneously combust. But man, what a way to go, right? I'm working on the next part, so it should be up soon (I hope!). Thank you so much for the review - I really, really appreciate it.
7 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Aspiro
I like this chapter a lot; I enjoy any story that features Pam having guts we only wish she could have. I think you hit the nail on the head when she asks him, "How did you do it?" Very poignant! --CH
Author's Response: Oh if only Pam could grow a pair and muster up some courage. Lord knows no one else in the office will, so she'll have to do it for them. *cough*Jim!*cough* But for her to now be looking at Jim in a relationship, being the one wanting the 'taken' person... creepy symmetry, much? Aaaaanyway, thanks for taking the time to review! :)
7 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Aspiro
I like this chapter a lot; I enjoy any story that features Pam having guts we only wish she could have. I think you hit the nail on the head when she asks him, "How did you do it?" Very poignant! --CH
Date: March 20, 2007 03:11 pm Title: Aspiro
Oh, this is soooo good! Update soon!
Author's Response: :) Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter! *writes furiously* Thanks so much for the review!
Date: March 20, 2007 01:02 pm Title: Pravda
Well done - I like Jim as her muse. Keep it going!!!!
Author's Response: Hehe thanks. I so think Jim is her muse. Heck, he's my muse. The next part should be up soon! Thanks for the review!
Date: March 20, 2007 12:56 pm Title: Pravda
I think it is most definitely worth finishing. There are a million get together stories out there but yet I keep reading them. But I do think it is different because of the art aspect. Let Jim see the drawings.......Let us see what happens then....... :-)
Author's Response: There are SO many stories... I have like, 35 favorites so that I can get alerts to keep track! Thanks so much for the review! I promise, Jim will see the drawings, and then some. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :-)
Date: March 20, 2007 10:47 am Title: Pravda
Worth finishing? Absolutely, it is! I thought it was all good - no laughable bits.
Oh, and Karen should NOT be there!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Hehe I'm with you on the no Karen... but we shall see! The next part will be up soon. Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
10 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2007 07:42 am Title: Pravda
I think it's quite sweet, but I don't think you necessarily need to do the big get together scene because I don't really see how it'd be any different from all the rest. Not saying you're not a talented writer, but it gets a little old after awhile... maybe something a little more... inspired ;) Very nice fic!
Author's Response: I see what you mean... I'm trying to go the different route by having Pam use her art to show Jim (and herself) what she's known all along. We'll see what happens. Either way, from the writing I've done I've learned that you can't please all of the people all the time. So here's hoping its original enough to catch people's eye, or at least make people think. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: March 20, 2007 04:45 am Title: Pravda
Worth finishing? Absolutely. In fact I almost left your standard "OMG You can't end it THERE!!!" review. :)
I loved the descriptions of Pam's sketchbook, the smudges of charcoal that made up the Casino Night sketch. It makes me wish I could actually see them.
Let's just say I'm very interested to see where you go from here... Plus, the idea that you're to point of Pam going to Jim in the story, and we STILL have two chapters to come has me a little giddy. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad the descriptions of her sketches were realistic... I am not an artist, so I was hoping that it came across from an artist's point of view. Expect more descriptions of the drawings to come. I'm working on the next (possibly final part, depending on how the muse is feeling), so hopefully it will be up soon! Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
Date: March 20, 2007 03:39 am Title: Pravda
Loved it. Definitely worth finishing. Stick to it, or I'll come after you.
I'm fully serious. I take fanfiction very seriously.
I'd also say more but I've a project due tomorrow. But please, please, please get that new chapter written, done, and up!
Author's Response: Um, ok? *cowers* Hehe thanks for the review! Trust me, I understand. Fanfiction is a serious matter! So I will try to have the next part up asap! Good luck with your project, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 19, 2007 10:11 pm Title: Pravda
yes, yes yes! you have to finish this. it was amazing. i loved every single word and the concept behind the story. i have to know what pam says to jim! update this soon!!!
Author's Response: Oooooooh, thank you so much! What a sweet review! I am working on the next chapter, and hopefully it will be to your liking! Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
10 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2007 10:03 pm Title: Pravda
This is almost more worth finishing than the April 5th ep that shows if Jim gets beat up, that's how much I loved it! *grins*
Author's Response: Oh my! Strong words. I am finishing the next part, or working on it, so... fear not? Thanks so much for the review! Hehe you made me smile so big. (how's that for slammin' grammar from the author?)