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Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 11:52 am Title: lately I've lost my tongue

Very sweet.

Reviewer: argentlife Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2008 10:21 am Title: lately I've lost my tongue

see sometimes I forget how I adore Ryan and Kelly - and then I read something like this and I remember it all again. Thank you for a great read.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 01:38 pm Title: lately I've lost my tongue

hehe. wow, ryan... that guy... he is an odd one. but cute, so it evens out. mostly odd cause of kelly :P.

i don't think i would ever make a guy buy tampons, i hate buying them myself 

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2007 09:57 am Title: lately I've lost my tongue

Author's Response: I always think of you when I post Ryan/Kelly now since you said that's all you read!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

LOL.  I'm trying to branch out more with the stories.  You  know- Ensemble that have Ryan and/or Kelly, or Jim and Pam stories featuring Ryan and Kelly.  It's fun!

Don't forget to put this on the LJ.

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 06:46 pm Title: lately I've lost my tongue

Oh, I love this. All of it. Also, best first two and last two lines ever!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked that, I tried to have them kind of mirror each other.

Reviewer: Penguin_jammies Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 09:44 am Title: lately I've lost my tongue

As Jen 74 said, I think you captured Ryan perfectly.  I think he gets nervous every month that Kelly’s not going to get her period.

And I love this line: “He wonders if loving that someone loves you is the same thing as loving them back.”   



Author's Response: Especially after that deleted scene about how she "forgets" to take her birth control? Haha, I'd be worried too! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Bailey08 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 06:32 am Title: lately I've lost my tongue

Waking up to a new Ryan/Kelly story is a good way to start the day!  Very well done!  



Author's Response: I always think of you when I post Ryan/Kelly now since you said that's all you read!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2007 06:12 am Title: lately I've lost my tongue

Although we don't see much of their relationship onscreen, I think you captured exactly how I see Ryan in my mind.  It's a great story!



Author's Response: Thank you! I feel the same way about Ryan. In fact, this story was inspired by an interview BJ Novak gave where he said that he think that Ryan loves being loved by Kelly.  Seems so fitting to his character.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 08:55 pm Title: lately I've lost my tongue

(Shhh, don't tell anyone.)  I'm actually a ma'am.  Only my name is male.  Or, maybe, like that library manager in The Pilot, I have a very deep voice.  Heehee.

Author's Response: Haha, I figured as much, but quoting Michael isn't quite the same when you change the "sir" to "ma'am" heehee.  I use "you are correct sir!" as a general rule-of-thumb, but I'll save a "you are correct ma'am" just for you from now on ;)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 08:38 pm Title: lately I've lost my tongue

Does he think she might be pregnant because she hasn't sent him in for tampons for a while?  That's the one thing I'm not sure of.

I am sure that I like it, though! This line "He wonders if loving that someone loves you is the same thing as loving them back." is very interesting!  This line "But it’s pink, and it’s hers really, at least in all the ways that matter." is really sweet, and I like the way you end it.

I always like seeing your name as author.  Your stories vary a LOT (/Kevin), but they always intrigue me!! 



Author's Response: You are correct sir!  Basically he thinks she's pregnant, so he wants to propose before she admits it to him. And what a compliment that you like seeing that I'm the author?? Seriously, thank you, wow.  I always love reading your reviews of my stories because I love the questions you pose, it really gives me something to respond to.  

Reviewer: chicagolights Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2007 08:27 pm Title: lately I've lost my tongue

Cute! I like Ryan/Kelly fics. Ryan fascinates me as a character for some reason.

Author's Response: I completely agree!  For some reason I find myself identifying with Ryan more than any of the other characters.  Thanks so much for reviewing!

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