Date: May 03, 2007 07:29 am Title: Skill #5: Let your friends do the talking-Part 2
Great job with Pam telling Jim off--I love this story and I'm so glad to see Jim get set straight (over and over and over again---it's really what needs to happen)
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was starting tothink I was going a little overboard with the "setting Jim straight" scenes but then I thought about it and it seemed like he deserved it.
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Skill #5: Let your friends do the talking-Part 2
I really like this story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: May 02, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Skill #5: Let your friends do the talking-Part 2
Ooh. I wonder who it is in the hallway? Katy? Roy? Karen? I hope Patrick's discussion gets Jim thinking about how much of a wanker he HAS been to Pam.
One small note -- you called Patrick "Charlie" a couple of times in this chapter.
Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Wow. Haha. Bad habit. I watch wayyyy too much lost.
I think I'm gonna go fix that.
Date: April 30, 2007 01:37 pm Title: Skill #1: Drink Vodka
I'm absolutely LOVING this story, especially this latest chapter! I can't wait to see what Patrick does to Jim.
Author's Response: Oh, Jim. He's in for a world of trouble.
Date: April 29, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Skill #8: Set him straight.
Excellent chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you VERY much.
Date: April 29, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Skill #8: Set him straight.
YAY PAM!!!!
Great chapter can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: April 29, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Skill #8: Set him straight.
Yay Pam for getting that all out! And I like Patrick a lot...what's he going to do to Jim? Can't wait to see where things progress from here!
Author's Response: I love it when Pam yells at people....
Date: April 29, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Skill #8: Set him straight.
I completely dig ScornedPam! That was the most deserved slap.
Author's Response: I thought so too.
10 [Report This]Date: April 28, 2007 08:47 am Title: Skill #7: Bring in the boy
Awesome! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :-)
Date: April 24, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Skill #7: Bring in the boy
You know, I love Jealous!Jim...is there anything better? It's malicious and delicious and Pam can do whatever she wants :)
Author's Response: Oh, Jim.
How much you have yet to learn.
Date: April 24, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Skill #7: Bring in the boy
I totally adore Patrick. And good writing of a British dialect. I have to say that I have been so enjoying this story and tonight (with the hubby out of town) watching Deadliest Catch (because there is NOTHING ON) I literally was begging the computer screen for an update to some story I was following and then bing, there you were. GREAT!
Seriously, you write conversation as well as anyone I've read, and I can't wait to see what happens. I still want them to dance :-) but I know you'll do something great no matter what.
BTW, great penname.
Author's Response: Yeah! I really hate those nights where you're so bored and you're reduced to just sitting there refreshing, waiting for a new story to come in. That's why/when I write mine.
Thank you for the review!
Date: April 24, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Skill #7: Bring in the boy
First of all - I love that Charlie from Lost is Patrick b/c I can totally see and hear him as Patrick. Second of all - I can't wait to see where this goes! More please :)
Author's Response: Yes! I love Charlie!
Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: April 23, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Skill #6: Let your friends do the talking
Okay, first, I don't know if I've reviewed to this story yet, and if I haven't, my most sincere apologies! Second... I am laughing really hard right now, because I just noticed your pen name. This is what happens when you read at 11:30 at night. But seriously, this is a great premise (Allison? My new best friend!), and you have an awesome first six chapters! Thanks so much for writing, heh, and for unknowingly making me laugh. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
I'm so glad you like my pen name!
Date: April 23, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Skill #6: Let your friends do the talking
Yay! Competition for Jim! Bring it on, Dom! (Great picture, BTW)
More, please!
Author's Response: I love Dom...always have....
Date: April 23, 2007 11:12 am Title: Skill #5: Going with the flow.
haha... i love your chapter end note :) i guess you need this review pretty badly! anyway, i love it so far. i just read the whole thing and i really love the twist of a new face being added to the mix. maybe she'll give FNB just the push she needs to stop being ridiculous? please update soon!
Author's Response: I really wish Pam would hurry up, by the rate they're going, they'll finally be getting together when they're in their late 50's.
Date: April 22, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Skill #5: Going with the flow.
Oooh. I like this story a lot. First, off, I must say how much I love links to "visual aids" for stories, so I'm loving those in your fic.
I like Allison a lot. That's just what this love triangle needs -- someone determined to stir the pot, bring things to a head. The only problem is that I actually like Karen (just like I like her in canon.) But you can't get in the way to made-for-each-other true love, baby. So, sorry, Karen. Because I'm thinking that once she gets a little confidence, Hot!Pam will not be denied.
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Yeah. If I were in that office, I would be Allison. I'd be bustin' some chops.
Date: April 22, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Skill #1: Drink Vodka
This is the first fanfiction I have ever read and I like it a lot. At first I thought you were going to make Jim interested in Allison, which I don't know if I would have been too happy about, but still would have enjoyed reading it. I like where you are going with this, making Allison a nice friend for Pam, she sure could use one!!! I could completely see this situation actually happening. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! ;-)
Date: April 22, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Skill #5: Going with the flow.
Haha, Jim in a dress. Oddly, reminds me of Family Guy.
It went from laughing to not so funny really fast. I didn't think that change was really possible (laughing to awkward, sure, but laughing to mean spirited, I didn't believe), but just a few months ago, I saw it with two of my friends and I was like, whoa.
And I don't like rum and cokes. Actually, I don't like alcohol. I prefer straight coke. Haha.
And Jim doesn't need his ass kicked. (well, he does), but he should be kicked straight into Pam. And have them make out. hehe
Author's Response: Yeah. It really has gone down to borderline depressing. (I'm probably exagerating here.)
Date: April 18, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Skill #4: Going clubbing
I am just catching up on my reading and this story is the most fun! I love Allison and it's about time someone is nice to our Pammy! And I love stories where Pam really dolls up and shocks Jim. You know he'll be speechless! Great story, post soon, I want to know what happens. I hope they dance together...... :-)
Author's Response: I love a speechless Jim.
Date: April 17, 2007 11:12 am Title: Skill #4: Going clubbing
Pam is not uptight compared to Angela (or me sadly)
And yeah, wearing that, Jim would be SHOCKED
Author's Response: I wish they'd sexy up Pam just once in The Office so that we could all see what it looks like when JK's brain breaks....out of arousal.
Date: April 17, 2007 11:10 am Title: Skill #3: Making friends
Michael telling everyone else to keep sexual innuendos and other inapproiate behaviors down... yeah, take your own advice :)
Haha, I love that she has power over Michael.
And I know her as the girl on Friends for one scene.
Author's Response: Yeah. It's about time that someone (other than Jan) had power over Michael. The fact that he's supposed to be her superior makes it better.
Date: April 17, 2007 12:59 am Title: Skill #4: Going clubbing
I'm really liking allison she's exactly what pam needs
Author's Response: Thanks. I think the fact that they're so different and can learn so much from each other, makes them have a really strong bond.
Date: April 16, 2007 09:55 pm Title: Skill #4: Going clubbing
OK, having Pam in that Jenna outfit would break Jim's brain. And Allison is possibly right up there with girl7's Jonathan on my fav. fanfic character list :)
Author's Response: Haha. Jim is going to have his brain broken several times in this fic.
I love Jonathan. He's like the made-up character that everyone accepts as a character.
If they ever bring up Jim's brother on the office, his name had better be Jonathan.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 15, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Skill #3: Making friends
That's so weird that you would pick Eva Amurri to play this new character, because I just saw her on tv today in The Banger Sisters. Anyway, I'm very interested in where this story is headed :)
Author's Response: I've never actually seen that movie but do know that she and her mom were in it.
Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2007 12:54 pm Title: Skill #3: Making friends
I usually don't like non-canon characters, but I'd like to see where you take this!
Author's Response: Thank you! The idea came to me when I was watching Saved and I thought that Pam could really use a friend and the kind of girl Cassandra's character is in Saved is so different from Pam but can teach Pam a lot so her personality is somewhat being molded into Allison's character.