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Reviewer: fireworkfiasco Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 01:30 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

Yay. I'm very excited to see where this leads! I love how natural Ryan and Pam feel together; it's a very interesting what if? scenario. Love this more and more! 

Oh, and BJ's hot.



Author's Response: BJ = hot.  Its true, so true.  You are awesome, btw, and thank you!!

Reviewer: Klankie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

I can't tell you how much I am loving this story.  I never really liked Ryan all that much.  Plus I have always been a huge Jam fan, but now you have turned my Office fandom world upside down.  I can't believe that I am actually rooting for Pam/Ryan now.   I have even sought out other fics looking for that pairing now.  (Although, no disresect to other writers, but I prefer yours.)  But I still want Jim and Pam to be together,  oh the turmoil!  Hee.  Thinking about this story also made me find and reread the Improper Bostonian with B.J. on the cover.  I have a newfound respect for his hotness.

Thank you for opening my eyes to the glory that is B.J. Novak and for constantly updating this dawesome story.

One other thing that I love is that you made Karen likeable and relateable.  Kudos!



Author's Response: Oh my GOD, can I just tell you how much I am dying to get a copy of that Improper Bostonian??? I tried going on the website but I don't live in Boston so I couldn't get one :( Its kind of a tragedy.  And did you watch his recent appearance on Conan?  If that doesn't turn someone into a BJ fan nothing will :) 

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg okay so you know i love this like more than anything but there were just so many MOMENTS in this one that were so BRILLIANT and omg. like. just. 

Author's Response: Thank you!! You rock :) :)

Reviewer: gliss Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

Great chapter! :D


Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 12:24 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

Aw hell, I'm all into the Ryan/Pam dynamic now, and though I love him with Kelly in general, I hate to see Pam get the short end AGAIN!  Ok, maybe that's not where you're going - you have a tendency to be unforseeably creative!  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Am I really unforseeably creative?? That is excellent! :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 12:14 pm Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

I'm curious to see where this is going.  

Currently, I feel no need to smack you down.  I'm sure you are very happy about that, because I know you were pretty scared.  I didn't even need the vomicillin when Pam and Ryan had sex on purpose, when they weren't even drunk.  Maybe you wore me down with all the touching, shameless flirting, and Cyrano de Bergerac-style-sex in prior chapters.  I don't know.  I can't explain it. (/Ryan)

However, tomorrow's a new day (at work), right?  So, I'd better see Ryan with a newfound commitment to Kelly, Karen and Jim on the outs, and Pam and Jim having sex somewhere and declaring true undying love for one another.  ('Cuz that's gonna happen in this story.) 

And I think where Jim said: “Um, I’m kind of tired actually. Rain check?”  that he really meant: "Um, I'm kind of tired of having sex with you and thinking of Pam all the time.  Have a good life and don't let the door hit you on your way out, okay?"

BTW, I have the dojo on speed-dial.  Just sayin'.



Author's Response: Hahah, wow, I thought the second round of Ryan/Pam sex would send you heaving over the side of the boat ;) All of successes in fanfic have come from my ability to slowly, and painfully, wear someone down.  Keep that dojo on hand though... just in case!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 11:54 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

I was so excited to see an update to this story. I love how things are not so black and white here...its so much more realistic. That Pam and Ryan have sorta-feelings for each other, hook up yet again the morning after. I love how everyone immediately jumps in to bail each other out of potentially revealing moments with Michael. Talk about a team building exercise -- this trip sure was one!

I'm enjoying the continued awkwardness between Jim and Pam, but at least they're talking now, even if it's just about being friends. I was fearful that the drunken 'passion' between them the night before would make speaking even more difficult, but I'm glad to see that it isn't.

And Ryan having no messages from Kelly...wow, that was a surprise. She might be a lot smarter than any of us give her credit for, or maybe her date went that well.

I cannot wait to see what happens when everyone goes home.



Author's Response: I'm so glad that you appreciate the "grey areas" of the situation hehe.  And next up should reveal more about what happens once they are back in the "real world." :) Thank you!!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 11:51 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

Um. Holy hell. This story is doing funny things to my insides. In the BEST way :)

Author's Response: Haha, thank you!!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 11:48 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

I am so in love with Ryan. In this story only though. But yeah, if he pulled me in and kissed my forehead like that... *sigh* Adorable.

And every single day for the past like five days I've been sitting in the computer lab writing non-stop papers, but repeatedly hitting update on MTT between sentences and just praying to see an update for this.

I don't know how you got Jim to go from a-hole to sexiest-Jim-I've-ever-read to nice guy again, but you did and it's totally believable. I like that he wants to be friends again. Is that what he was going to say when he grabbed her arm in the hallway? Will you tell me? Pleeeease?

I'm concerned about Kelly not leaving Ryan any voicemails. This fic could really go anywhere, so I'm dying to know where you take it. Will you have Ryan decide that he wants something serious with Kelly? With Pam? Or just fun with Pam?

In conclusion, your story has taken over my life. Next time why not just find a way to email me some crack? Pusher! I'm already getting jittery for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Haha thank you! I'm so glad that you are still into it, its such a fun story to write :) Do you want me to send you some actual crack in the mean time??

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 11:48 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

Yay!  Cousin Mufasa!  Hee!  (You do love Ryan!)

And, ouch, Ryan rushing right over to Kelly's.  But yay to Jim begging off going over to Karen's!  Maybe he & Pam can work on that 'being friends or something' then.



Author's Response: Hehehe, was it ever a question that I love Ryan? ;) Thank you!!

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 11:47 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

I'm very excited to see what happens next.
I need more chapters ASAP
I'm going crazy without all this unresolved sexual tension between Ryan and Jim! haha.

Author's Response: Hahaha, I know right?  Think people would get mad if I ended it with a torrid Jim/Ryan love affair??

Reviewer: starblossom56 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 11:47 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

OH MAN. I'm totally gonna go back and talk to you about this in my journal, but !!!!! THE ANGST. I need to know what'll happen, like NOW! You keep exceeding my expectations with this story. AWESOMESAUCE.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!! :)

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2007 11:35 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

EEEE!!!!!!!!

This is so dawesome.

Cousin mufasa callback!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Yes!  Ryan and Pam in business together!  That would be cool.  He even knows her favourite tea!

good job!!!

and of course Michael thinks Stevie Nicks is a man! 



Author's Response: Hehehe, thank you!  That Mufasa scene kills me EVERY TIME!

Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Going through withdrawals!  I am practically checking the site every hour to see if you have posted again!

Author's Response: Hee! Sorry that chapter took longer ;)

Reviewer: lesslikeyou Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 04:33 pm Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.

Oh my good lord.


Author's Response: Hehe... thanks? :)

Reviewer: xtaline Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 10:05 am Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.

I have to say, I started reading this for the hint of Michael and Jan that's in it, but this Ryan and Pam stuff has me hooked!  It caught me completely off guard and is absolutely great!

Author's Response: Hee!  I do love Michael and Jan, they are wonderfully dysfunctional :) Thank you!

Reviewer: kategirl19 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 09:28 am Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.

this story is amazing!! i absolutely love it, you definitely need to continue.

of course i'm a huge JAM fan....
but i LOVE the pam/ryan stuff, it's fantastic.



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Annakovsky Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:59 pm Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.

holy CRAP, this is so twisted and amazing.


Author's Response: :) Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: Annakovsky Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:55 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

THIS IS SO HOT. I love how they're just mildly drunk at all times, as you are on a cruise, and how she and Ryan just sort of mess around. IT IS AWESOME. I WANT THEM TO GET MARRIED AND HAVE BABIES AND STUFF. I meant to go to bed an hour ago but I can't stop reading this.

Author's Response: I've never been on a cruise, but yes I think if I were on one (especially for work?) I would be drunk the entire time.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Annakovsky Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:46 pm Title: I love girl talk

Man, you've got me shipping Pam/Ryan so hard that I was all, DO NOT RUIN THINGS JIM HALPERT. Haha. That's quite an achievement! Especially since I'm shipping them in the HAPPY way, not the angsty way.

Author's Response: Yes! That is awesome.

Reviewer: Annakovsky Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:32 pm Title: I think you're thinking of the Hunt for Red October

stretching his legs across her lap.

 auuuuuuugh, omg, that and the FINGER HOLDING, and everything omg. You are really hitting me at that place deep down inside that's still 15 years old, and that is a good thing. If a little embarrassing for me. I love how EASY the Pam/Ryan is - everything about Jim/Pam is hard... that's what - oh God. Anyway. Jim/Pam is so tortured, and I love the contrast here, how Pam and Ryan just fall together easily, and how high schooly and sweet it is. 



Author's Response:

"love how EASY the Pam/Ryan is - everything about Jim/Pam is hard..."

Annd there you have it!  I'm not sure that anyone besides Bennie has pointed this out, but this is the entire point I am trying to get at.  You win. 

Reviewer: Annakovsky Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:25 pm Title: The suspense is just so exciting, isn't it?

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude. Drink sharing? Pam running her hands through Ryan's hair? Changing in his room? YOU ARE KILLING ME WITH AWESOMENESS.


Author's Response: Hee! Yes! Thank you!

Reviewer: Annakovsky Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.

Dude, this is SO GOOD so far! It's hitting all my vacation/out-of-the-office kinks, SO HARD. And the Pam/Ryan is HOT. I hope they totally hit it.


Author's Response: Kovsky is reading?? Yes!  You rock so hard ;) I'm glad we are LJ buddies

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 05:08 pm Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.

Oh my goodness.

Author's Response: Not sure if that's good or bad, but I'll take it!

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 04:59 pm Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.

OH MY GOD.

Author's Response: Thanks..? :)

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