Date: March 27, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Ooh, reading the back of Jim's neck...I like it. And I'm intrigued...please make more soon. (And Bayonne?? Who'd of thunk it.)
Author's Response: There will be more up very soon (if not today then tomorrow morning). And, I'm such a dork that I actually looked up where in New Jersey that cruises could depart from and Bayonne was what I came up with :) Stay tuned!
Date: March 27, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Oooh, Jim's angry because Pam fell asleep on Ryan's shoulder! Jealous!
I just adore this. The Vance Refrigeration van and your description of it, the "fifth circle of hell", Jim trying to hear the conversation, just lots of great stuff.
I actually don't think Jim is going to be really angry with Pam, nor do I think he has a leg to stand on if he is. But: a) we'll see, and 2) (hahaha, I crack myself up) I suspend my disbelief for this story.
It's sweet that Michael and Dwight are trying to protect Pam.
I look forward to more!
Author's Response: There is definitely going to be quite a bit of jealously tossed around in this fic (hence the name), and I'm talking about from every which way, hehe :) Glad you like it so far!
10 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
okay so i'm definitely already a fan of this fic. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more very very soon :)
Date: March 27, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Love it already! I'd be happy to beta, if you're still interested.
Author's Response: I am definitely definitely interested! In fact, I just emailed you the next chapter :)
8 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2007 03:30 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Starts out great! When do we get to the explicit part?
Author's Response: Oh don't you worry ;) It'll be along down the road a bit... I've got the whole thing pretty mapped out. Glad you like it so far!