1 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2023 05:03 am Title: The Rain
Aww, this is so sweet 🥹
1 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2020 05:42 pm Title: The Rain
I really like this a lot. They always do seem to do well in the rain in fic and canon both, and you making it a theme running through their relationship that's changed how they think about it is quite lovely. This is just really warm stuff you've produced here.
1 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2020 01:31 pm Title: The Rain
This was very sweet. I love the premise of all of their milestones having rain involved, especially since it was raining durning the proposal. Super cute!
Author's Response: I enjoyed showing that through the writing! Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2020 10:31 pm Title: The Rain
This was so sweet! I loved it. Short fluffy pieces that give realistic depth to their relationship are some of my favorites. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
1 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2020 08:22 pm Title: The Rain
I love all the imagery embedded everywhere here. How first the rain brought healing to them, then washed clean the past, and finally triggered new growth and life. Beautiful images in there.
Short, sweet, and lovely.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
1 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2020 07:01 pm Title: The Rain
Very sweet and nice links with the rain throughout! I love a little glimpse into domestic Jim and Pam.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2020 05:51 pm Title: The Rain
So cute!! I love the idea that the rain is so important to them and their relationship. It's adorable. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2020 11:07 pm Title: The Roads That Led Us Here
Well, that’s just what I needed - something sweet to go with all the chocolate I’m consuming!
Oh Pam. It always breaks my heart a little when she reflects on her time with Roy. My husband is all “I don’t dance” too, but there was never any question that our first dance would be the exception to that. Her life is so much richer for having made her way to Jim and this story captures that so well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! I'm so happy I was able to convey this so well.
1 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2020 06:34 pm Title: The Roads That Led Us Here
Lovely bit of fluff. It's important to remember the road as a relationship grows. Not to dwell on it necessarily, but to gauge progress. Love that they can view the ups and downs of their early relationship in a way that brings them closer together now.
And it's always a wonderful image to have Jim and Pam dancing together. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad I was able to paint the picture nicely!
1 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2020 03:58 pm Title: The Roads That Led Us Here
Super, duper cute!! I could totally picture this happening, Pam reminiscing and Jim just making her feel so good about her and them. Ugh, my heart. Adorable, great job!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm so happy that came across well!
Date: March 07, 2020 08:16 pm Title: Happy 10th Birthday, CeCe!
Super cute! I like the joy and energy in your writing. You clearly have a lot of fun creating. Thank you for a fun read!
Author's Response: I really did have a lot of fun! Thanks for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2020 03:46 am Title: Happy 10th Birthday, CeCe!
This was fun. Lovely to see the Halperts having a day like this. I can easily see that Phillip would have gotten the highest score in mini-golf, running around tapping his ball hither and yon. However in golf, mini or otherwise, one wants the lowest score. Maybe they've got some family rules or something.
Yes it feels kind of rushed, some grammar issues here and there, but they don't really detract from the story.
Just lovely to see them having some good time as a family. I wish my parents had pulled me out of school for my 10th birthday. My classmates would have been jealous too. All in all a lovely little story. Thanks for writing it.
Author's Response:
I'll definitely need to go back and edit it haha. I threw it together pretty fast once I saw NLM's note (like in 40 minutes kind of fast since I had a tiny window of time)!
As you can tell, I don't play golf (or mini golf) very often. They don't have family rules...I just don't know the game very well, but thank you for giving me the benefit of the doubt!
Thanks for the feedback and reading. Even though it was a quick write, it was a lot of fun.
1 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2020 03:10 am Title: Happy 10th Birthday, CeCe!
This was very, very sweet. A nice glimpse into what could be. I loved the nod to canon during their mini golf game.
Author's Response: Thank you for the sweet note. I was hoping people would notice the nod to canon.