7 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2: Four Times Pam Almost Called Off Her Wedding
the last section puts a gut-wrenchingly poignant ending to pam's unhappiness. sad, but well-deserved.
9 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 2: Four Times Pam Almost Called Off Her Wedding
Pam had it rough. I am so glad she did call off her wedding. I mean, Roy did so many things to her that just aren't right, but she ended it. And a year later, she can be happy.
10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: Four Times Jim Almost Told Pam
I probably read this at FFN, but I am reading it here also, and its just so good, and so sad. All those almost... it could ave been .... faster, I wouldn't say easier, but it could have been faster and different if any of those almosts actually happened. Its like, it was so heartbreaking. Poor Jim. She didn't know, she didn't want to admit it to herself, whatever. It still winds up with Jim being broken hearted, but still, he still keeps up the friendship and is still Jim, even when he is so disappointed.
Booze Cruise and Drug Testing both are HUGE such perfect times to tell, but not really. I love the line... well, I love a lot of them, but the "A jinx is like a promise, and he’s never broken one. Especially when it comes to her." really just hit home right there.
Date: April 06, 2007 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 2: Four Times Pam Almost Called Off Her Wedding
Wow. Loved both chapters- the whole theme of 'what could have been' and near misses on this show is just so heart-breaking, and you captured that mood really well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Date: March 30, 2007 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: Four Times Jim Almost Told Pam
Wow, great story. I loved every bit of it. Makes me realize that no matter how tough it is to watch Jim and Pam now, the most important aspect of their story is that she didn't marry Roy, thank god!
Author's Response: I think we can all be grateful that Pam didn't go through with it, otherwise where would Season 3 be? Worse than it is right now in terms of JAM. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: March 30, 2007 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: Four Times Pam Almost Called Off Her Wedding
The second vignette here is the most painful to read, because we all know that Roy's computer is probably still loaded with porn. Both of these short stories are excellent!
Author's Response: It's true; Toby's not the only "skeevy little perv." Thanks for giving these a second read :)
Date: March 30, 2007 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Four Times Jim Almost Told Pam
"Just so later he can say he tried" -- still gets me, even after several readings! I love that line.
Author's Response:
Well thank you! Our poor Jim probably already knew the outcome of his risk but still went ahead with it anyway. And that's why we love him.
Thanks again!