Reviews For Sinking
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
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Date: April 07, 2007 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2007 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. It was so beautifully sad and the last line was so heartbreaking. Very well done.
Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: April 01, 2007 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so nicely done. And even though Jim and Pam are both alone, at least Jim is no longer with Karen, so I see that as hopeful. (Not only is that glass half-full, dammit, it's rose-colored!!) And... Jim saying that Roy wasn't right for Pam makes me think "and Karen isn't right for Jim"!
This is very good.
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: April 01, 2007 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1
i like this. i like how it ends with karen because of a simple 'i am' nothing dramatic. not even the fight. it was because of a simple freudian slip type idea.
and then, pam and her heart, and she is sinking. but jim will be there soon. at least in my mind he would be :).
good joB!