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Reviewer: ayla Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 11:38 pm Title: Babylon

Love this!!! You know, I'm starting to think the only way Jim and Pam will ever work out their issues is if they really do get locked in a supply closet/bathroom/confined space of your choice for a whole episode.

Author's Response: I would pay a lot of money to see that episode. Maybe that could be the plot of season four? Thanks for reading, ayla!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 11:36 pm Title: Babylon

THAT was fabulous. Seriously loved so much about it that I don't know where to start. First off anytime these two are in a confined space it's a good thing, but you just made the activities so believable. The confined space DIDN'T make her come clean right away. Instead she continued to hem and haw and they played games - SO THEM. But finally at the right moment, she TOLD HIM. AND I LOVED the idea of a 'do-over' and her telling him that way. Just GREAT. Thanks for a nice read before the work week begins...

Author's Response: Glad I could entertain, LoveFool! When I got a "confined space" request, I kind of panicked, like "another supply closet: and then they made out"? C'mon PJ, think outside the box! I kind of think, at this stage in their relationship, that the initial reaction would be discomfort and denial. And these days, I can practically hear Pam thinking "if only I could go back and do it again." So a do-over just felt like her: not quite grown up, but the best she can do for now. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: skjbean Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 11:21 pm Title: Babylon

Awesome.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 11:14 pm Title: Babylon

That was just what I needed.  Completely lovely.  Although I have to admit that when the guard said, "Are you coming or what?" I automatically thought, "That's what she said."  ;)


Author's Response:

Ha! They have us all so well trained with TWSS. Although I will admit to slipping a few lines like that in there intentionally. You only caught one!

Thanks for commenting!

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