Date: April 25, 2017 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Though I definitely understand fandom and fanfic frustrations, I still wish this didn't have the "cheap ending", it was so excellently written before that point...
10 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2008 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
BAHAHA THAT ENDING WAS SO AWESOME. That was so much better than having a cliche 'ohhh yay now we're in love' ending that I get really sick of.
Awesooome.
Date: April 04, 2007 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I really like the tongue-in-cheek ending. I only wish the first part of the story hadn't been as good as it was.
Date: April 04, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha! Weirdest, most unexpected ending ever. You win.
The rest leading up to it was really sweet too, by the way.
7 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2007 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked the story, but the ending not so much....about the truck it was kindof out of nowhere but that's just my opinion. Good job otherwise!
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2007 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet story, hysterically funny ending. Love it. Godspeed.
Date: April 04, 2007 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1
HAHAHAH!! Best. Ending. Ever.
I liked this fic as I was reading it, but this ending made me love it.
Date: April 04, 2007 08:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my GOSH! That was completely and totally unexpected, and I even knew before I started reading from comments elsewhere that the ending would be a surprise. I loved it!
Date: April 04, 2007 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1
HA! Ya got me!
Date: April 04, 2007 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Uh...I'm not sure I know how to react to that ending other than uproarious laughter. I hope that was the intention. The story itself was really good, just the last part...WHA??? And also, HEE. So I guess my response to the story as a whole would be AWWHAHEE. Heh.
Date: April 04, 2007 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaa? Okay, unexpected plot twist at the end there, but...I'll just pretend that didn't happen. The rest was very sweet. :)
Date: April 04, 2007 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Hee. That just brightened my day. The ending was so unexpected, but hilarious. The entire story was well-written too though.
9 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2007 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG, THE ENDING!! It's totally wrong, but it made me laugh so hard!
Date: April 04, 2007 05:32 am Title: Chapter 1
This is really lovely and good, until the last line, where it's really feally funny.
And don't let anyone tell you that you don't know how to finish something, right?
Date: April 04, 2007 04:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm not a stranger to spit-takes. I mean, it doesn't happen that often, but when it does, it's usually hilarious for only me. Well, I've never actually snorted tea through my nose, but now I guess I can say that I have. That last line probably killed me just a little bit, but it was totally worth it.
And I definitely agree that with the addition of the last line, this could fit in with the BADFIC challenge. The rest is awesome, but really... that last sentence has glorious "BadFic" written all over it (in the best way, of course).
Date: April 04, 2007 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1
LMAO.
Ok, I really liked this fic, because I can see Pam's way of finally telling Jim how she feels would be in fits and starts, with a lot of "Um"s and inappropriate giggles.
But the last line is just cracktastic, and so I'm choosing to ignore it, because the rest of the story is really kind of sweet.
Actually, if you don't ignore the last line, this story could fit with the BADFIC challenge, LOL.