1 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2019 01:52 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
It feels like some of the epilogue here is missing--both from the reviews and from the last authors note. Otherwise lovely but right now it's kind of a sad ending.
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 07:11 am Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
This one is always fun to read because it’s so different, but when I get to the end I can’t help but create another little epilogue for myself.
I’m thinking they may have created another lil oops... After four yrs I doubt she was on the pill. So two for two!
6wks later: um jim... It's time we clear all of your stuff out of your room. It seems we will need that room for something else. She hands him a lil white stick. And of course he freaks out, huge grin twirling pam in the air excitement. He's especially excited that he will get to be there for everything this time. Awww... happy Jam :D
Date: April 05, 2010 11:39 pm Title: Grace Kelley and an iPod
im gonna cry...
Date: April 05, 2010 11:12 pm Title: Prologue
WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2010 11:28 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
YES! I'm going to bed now, but this was well worth the wait. Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2010 10:59 pm Title: Prologue
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD! (Sorry, If your religious, I didn't mean to disrespect you, but that was literally the first thought in my mind.) I can't believe this! I need to go to bed, yet this is too good... I'll read a little more.
You know your hooked when you can't go to sleep without finishing a fan fic!
10 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2008 12:41 am Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
this
is
wonderful.
thank you
Date: January 23, 2008 11:38 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
The beginning with daddy/daughter time was just precious!! And OMG that ending -- "This was me telling you that I’m still ridiculously in love with you and that the only man I want you dating is me, and not for long either.” -- where can I get a Jim???? lol
Date: January 23, 2008 11:31 pm Title: What a Week for Jim Halpert.
I always feel so bad for Karen, that scene was so tragic. And I'm glad Pam's not exactly jumping into a relationship after everything that just happened...
Date: January 23, 2008 11:25 pm Title: Telling the Truth is Harder Than It Looks.
*flails* You're in med school?? Me too!! I knew some of the descriptions in that second chapter sounded a bit too...accurate for fanfic. LOL!! What year are you in? Email me sometime if you get the chance... =)
Date: January 23, 2008 11:17 pm Title: Grace Kelley and an iPod
This entire chapter was so emotionally charged. I loved Pam's confession -- so heartbreaking! -- that she didn't want to ruin Jim and Karen's relationship, and Jim refusing to go home. *sigh*
Date: January 23, 2008 11:10 pm Title: Picking Your Battles
Oh, how heartbreaking!!
Date: January 23, 2008 11:05 pm Title: Prologue
Just started reading this -- oh my, what a beginning!! =)
Date: April 23, 2007 07:34 am Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
wow. what a "resolution." seriously though. awesome! i love it! it was a wonderful ending to a great story. i mean, how else does a Jam baby story end except for Jim and Pam together? but you did a great job of making this new and interesting. I love how he's immediately shocked and even though they're so in love they are all about not communicating effectively. you got the characters perfectly! great job.
Date: April 22, 2007 11:39 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
SQUEE!!! How could any "resolution" be better? ;)
Date: April 22, 2007 11:34 pm Title: What a Week for Jim Halpert.
Well, it's a widely-known fact that shacking up leads to true love, so I wholeheartedly agree with this plan. ;)
Date: April 22, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
Love this part: "Living with ‘his two girls’ as he refers to them in his head is a science Jim thinks he’s mastering." Silly Jim.
Well done, to create a 'happy' ending from this premise. Well done.
Date: April 22, 2007 09:04 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
hooray! perfect ending, couch sex is all they needed. I was so afraid you were going to let them date other people...this was better...loved this story!!
8 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
Wow. What a sweet and steamy happy ending. Thanks!
Date: April 22, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
That was just awesome. This was an unual story but really great! I've really enjoyed it, and I'm probably a little sad to see it go. And as for the ending, WOW just WOW. Thank you.
Date: April 22, 2007 03:26 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
Oh my gosh, soo soo cute! I loved this story so much! Great job! MY favorite line : I didn’t know some art school tool was going to try to steal you away
Date: April 22, 2007 12:13 pm Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
I love the resolution!
This line is so sweet: "Living with ‘his two girls’ as he refers to them in his head is a science Jim thinks he’s mastering."
This one makes me smile: "they should be given parents of the year awards for not screaming." But, kids? Remarkably sound sleepers. Just sayin'. Not that I'd... know. Yeah, actually, I do.
I really like this line "When his breathing finally returns to normal and he no longer sees stars behind his eyelids he feels her try to move off of him, instinctively he holds her closely and she relaxes back into his arms." So often in fanfic, you have the "climax", and then somebody rolls/gets off (not meant as a TWSS) of the other one immediately, which is (IMO) so unromantic. Relax, sit (or lie) a spell! This is so great, that she's about to get off and ruin the moment, and he doesn't let her.
This is fantastic: “I didn’t know some art school tool was going to try to steal you away,” he grumbles. It's funny, and I just love how he's saying all the right things to remove the possible misunderstanding.
Did you get the impression that I really liked this story? Because I did. You are all that is right in the paper industry.
Date: April 22, 2007 11:36 am Title: Prologue
Just wanted to say that I really loved this fic. The ending especially was great with how it was six months later (giving them all time to adjust) and there was still the slight misunderstanding that Jim and Pam are apt to have (where she thought he didn't want her and he thought she needed space). Good job writing!
Date: April 22, 2007 10:31 am Title: Epilogue- 6 Months Later
Oooo! Good ending!
I loved Jim trying to be respectful of the situation, and Pam, typically, misunderstanding.
Date: April 21, 2007 07:27 pm Title: What a Week for Jim Halpert.
wow. i was afraid to read this story because i usually don't like angst, but i decided to give it a try since i love all your other stories. and i'm so glad i did. can't wait to read the resolution.