Date: April 12, 2007 11:58 am Title: The Choice
haha, is it Creed?
Date: April 12, 2007 11:39 am Title: The Test
I reread the taperecorded message. Can I change my guess to Angela?
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 11:30 am Title: The Choice
Holy crap. HOLY CRAP. So you're telling me that Pam not being connected to the generator ISN'T the big twist? Cause that shocked the hell out of me. I'm going to have to peak at your spoiler on TWoP but before I do, my guess as to the identity of the masked killer: Katy
Date: April 12, 2007 11:23 am Title: The Choice
omg, that is so scary! I'm going back and forth between Andy and Roy
9 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 11:07 am Title: The Choice
YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT THERE. OMGOMGOMGOMG.
Yikes.
Date: April 12, 2007 10:59 am Title: The Choice
OHHH TELL me it's Dwight. Or Roy. I don't know. AHHHH KEEP GOING
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 08:30 am Title: The Test
I love it. I'm in pain reading it, because you've written it so well that its as if I'm in the room with them. I'm dying for more. I have no idea what Jim is going to do.
10 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 07:44 am Title: The Test
O.M.G.
This is amazing! So very original. So so sooo very well written, the visualizations were fantastic, I wasn't sure if it would have the same impact as actually seeing it on the tv screen, and it came very close.
I heart Saw.
8 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 05:57 am Title: The Test
YIKES. I was...not expecting that. But! It's really, really good. And I'm in for the long haul. Verrrrry interesting, I love it when I find a truly unique fic, and I'm pretty sure nothing has even come close to this. Yay! I can't wait for more pain and torture!
Date: April 12, 2007 12:32 am Title: The Test
Thank you. Now I want to watch all those damn movies. This makes for some great visuals. Keep going. Creep me out please!!!!!
And I love blood, guts & gore...
Date: April 11, 2007 06:58 pm Title: The Test
I never thought I'd see a saw and office crossover. The characters seem so innocent and and carefree, and to put them through this torture seems almost cruel. That's just how I saw it though. Apparently you don't mind subjecting them to torture. :P (I don't mean that as a dig, I mean that in jest.)
Anyway, this is great so far! I can see this is going to get more creepy and grisly as it goes on. Thats alright. As long as the violence and grisliness is not too over the top, i'll be ok. Keep going with this!!
Date: April 11, 2007 06:34 pm Title: The Test
This is a very different take on the usual fanfic. Very interesting and creepy too. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Date: April 11, 2007 05:57 pm Title: The Test
I generally don't see horror movies at all. Maybe I'll read the story peeking through my hands, like I would probably watch this kind of movie.
This is very well written and extremely creepy and disturbing (I'm cringing right now). Maybe your heading should read "not for kids and squeamish folks!" And it's going to get more deranged?
I'll do my best to stay with you! (Bravery may not be my strong suit.)
Author's Response: You can make it! Stay strong! (ch 2 is up)
Date: April 11, 2007 05:43 pm Title: The Test
Oh this is so freaky; therefore, I absolutely love it. Never would of thought of a Saw/Office crossover, but it's definitely an original idea. Please, please continue.
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 05:25 pm Title: The Test
OMG please, I know I just commented, but please don't kill poor Pamela. Nor do I want Karen to die either. AHH! HELP! lol
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 05:22 pm Title: The Test
OMG OMG OMG OMG MORE. i KNOW SOMEONE WILL DIE, BUT OH GOD! WOW THIS IS GOOD. i'M ALL HYPER NOW. I LOVE A GOOD KILLER STORY. Wow now I sound deranged. lolll <3333
Date: April 11, 2007 05:18 pm Title: The Test
OMG!!!!! What?... How?... Oh no, I'm scared!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 05:00 pm Title: The Test
Okay, I'm in. This is definitely unique!
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 04:56 pm Title: The Test
Wow. Two things I love. Saw and The Office. This is awesome! Please continue! :)
Date: April 11, 2007 04:04 pm Title: The Test
NO! You can't stop there!
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement! I'm almost done w. ch2.
Date: April 11, 2007 03:44 pm Title: The Test
This is extremly suspenseful. Do continue.
As soon as you can.
Date: April 11, 2007 03:19 pm Title: The Test
Uh...can't say that I'm too terribly fond of a story that involves one of them dying like that. This is....different. What I'd like to see is if you could find a way to let all of them live. That would certainly be interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. I just added CH2, and put a small spoiler (inspired by your post) on the TWOP board.
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2007 03:17 pm Title: The Test
Ah! This is so awesome! I actually had kind of the same idea, though I didn't have the balls to write it. It was with Pam, though, instead of Jim. I love Pam, but I see her timidness as her "sin" in Jigsaws eyes. Very cool. I liked how of the discription of Pam's expression, she knows she's going to die. Awesome, I can't wait!
Author's Response: Cool -- great minds think alike! I love Pam too but I just have a really hard time writing her, so Jim was my natural choice. I like the Saw setting becuase it's so overwhelming it forces the characters to really confront themselves in ways that a normal "Office" workday just can't. Thanks for the feedback. (Ch 2 is posted now)