Date: December 11, 2024 05:36 am Title: evermore
in my mind she says this to Roy IDC IDC
Date: December 10, 2024 11:57 pm Title: evermore
Need an entire book of this one just this one omfg???
Date: December 10, 2024 09:30 pm Title: evermore
I am in a puddle of my own tears thank you
Date: December 10, 2024 07:07 pm Title: evermore
My heart is mangled out on the floor so thanks for that. This is a painful but so interesting twist on them jesus
Date: December 09, 2024 07:49 am Title: folklore
Top 3 chapters FOR SURE my heart is so full and yet in agony bec god i want a love like this
Date: December 09, 2024 04:46 am Title: folklore
It's hard picking a favorite chapter from this entire work but this this is definitely top 3
1 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2023 02:11 pm Title: folklore
This chapter was on another level. Thanks for sharing!
1 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2023 02:03 pm Title: folklore
This is so sweet and hot at the same time. Thanks for sharing!
1 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2023 08:46 am Title: evermore
“Purpose… filled the hollow spaces in him.” Swoon! Such an incredible line to start with! And the morning after! There’s something about Pam in Jim’s button down sitting on his counter that always, always gets me. And Paris? I can just picture them there! I love Paris… the second time was when I fell in love though… first time needed the lay of the land, second time I definitely appreciated all of the details you write about. I’m sure that Jim’s return trip is better too, now that he’s with Pam too!
I too still have my tiny “La Tour Eiffel” from the street vendors along the Seine— and yes, I did haggle! The engagement scene was perfect, because you know exactly what both of them are thinking… especially loved her sudden need to kiss him.
I loved your use of the canon “you repay me just by being with me”. I think that’s canon, right?? And your love scenes are just gorgeous… not so detailed in the physical description but the sensual feeling makes them so intimate and sexy. Yes, a perfect end to a day in Paris!!
I don’t quite know what Danny’s up to, but I don’t like it. Especially after that deliciously flirty stairwell break… “why do I always feel like I’m being kidnapped??” I just love that Jim just NEEDS to kiss her. Still, I’m waiting for another shoe to drop…
I love your canon use of “I don’t even know who you are” and the crazy guy at the laundromat… I love reading all the different interpretations of that backstory, along with the familiarity and day to day I intimacy of your Jim and Pam doing her laundry one day.
Of course Karen would show. As much as I hate this, I do love that Pam agrees calmly to talk with Jim tomorrow, encouraging him to talk out his issues with Karen, even though her heart must be terribly frightened. Jim’s cool reception of her is quite satisfying though.
This has to be the most satisfying Jim Karen fan fic ending which happens in a matter of hours and I love that. It’s clear how everything changed the minute he met Pam, including living— and anything not that is just not acceptable. I love how Jim is protective of Pam’s yogurt too; a sweet callback in a dramatic tense scene. I’m not sure if this is a literary element but I love your little lists of what is running through Jim’s mind… that home is how Pam’s leg intertwines with his when they sleep, how she never orders fries and always eats his, laughing at his not funny jokes, losing her keys, her ponytail, and how she says his name. Again, it’s that daily intimacy of sharing a life. So good!
Again, what a fantastic nod to how destined they are— that she knew he was at her door, and that she was going to call him back that night. I love that there isn’t a thought in either of their minds that this— they— are it for each other. His canon words were so right in this scene, and Pam’s reaction is what we all wanted from Casino Night. So amazing. This was excellent! I’d love a whole fic of this, truly! I mean, we need to figure out this Danny stuff, right? You’re so talented and this is such a gem! And I’d love that see where else in Europe Jam travels! Makes me so excited to get abroad again!
Author's Response: Wow thank you SO much for the lengthy and well thought out review! I really do adore hearing what people loved most.
1 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2023 12:26 pm Title: folklore
Oh.My. God. What a stunning story! I listened to Everything Has Changed a couple times after reading and read it again and this is just a stunning match to that gorgeous, gorgeous song. I’ve read it before but read it again in anticipation of traveling to London in a few weeks and I just love it soooooo much. This Jim and this Pam and the way she just hands him her coffee in the elevator and that they just happen to work in the same place and both come from Pennsylvania?!? The dialogue was funny and heartwarming and you just feel like you’re in a little pub staring at this incredibly star crossed couple falling in love and starting their story. I love how Jim just blew off that girl from the back of the cab too. I mean, like she was just nothing… and she is compared to Pam. Your use of canon dialogue is so beautiful too in the way Pam tells Jim about Roy and finally decides it’s truly over with Roy. And I love this idea that they’re just so destined to be with each other that they aren’t waiting agonizingly to make decisions… like they know this is it, and they’re just tying up loose ends— as Pam promptly calls Roy, says it’s over, and heads home with Jim. Just stunning! There are 1000 incredible lines but one of my favorites is the one where they’re at the parrot tree and Jim has a vision of Sunday mornings with the paper and groceries and children and phone bills. Come on! Loved this so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I’m thrilled you liked it.
Enjoy London! It’s one of my favorite cities. If you have never been, you will love it. Paris is my fave (which is where part two of this story goes) but London holds a special place for me as well.
Thanks again for commenting and letting me know you enjoyed it!
Date: March 23, 2023 05:00 pm Title: folklore
FanFuckingTastic!!!!!
Date: March 23, 2023 12:26 pm Title: folklore
HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!
1 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2023 09:29 am Title: folklore
BAWLING PUDDLE OF TEARS OVER HERE - what an absolutely beautiful fill in for those moments d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: March 23, 2023 06:07 am Title: folklore
Awwwww…. That would have a been BRILLIANT for the end of the art show d84;a039;
Date: March 22, 2023 02:59 pm Title: folklore
OHHHHH…. How absolutely wonderful… I love the idea of revisiting!!!
(And, my first apartment had a garden tub…adore that image d84;a039;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh yes, gotta love a good garden tub! ;)
Date: March 22, 2023 05:42 am Title: folklore
Marvelously done. Sensory overload from it all, but really well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: March 21, 2023 04:59 pm Title: folklore
This was a GORGEOUS blend of events that happened and spicy what-ifs!!!!
Date: March 20, 2023 11:24 am Title: folklore
Finally getting to settle in and read… great start d84;a039;
Date: March 15, 2023 12:13 am Title: evermore
Stop. I don’t know how you took Dorothea the song & turned it into the genius that is Dorothea the story, but you did & it is so, so good!
The disappointment that Jim didn’t show up in the talking head was so soothed by that ending. What a great payoff!
Date: March 14, 2023 10:01 pm Title: evermore
Umm… I’m going to need chapter 3 of this immediately. Please.
Date: March 14, 2023 09:35 pm Title: evermore
The tension, holy god, the tension. I’m dying. Can’t leave a real review, have to get to the next chapter…
Date: March 14, 2023 06:57 pm Title: evermore
It’s a crime that I haven’t reviewed this yet.
The twists. The turns. The twists again. I love it so much.
I can’t even go through & pull out some of my favorite lines because I’d just be copying the entire story here.
It’s so clever. All the little details. I love this version of Pam, she’s got that end of Season 3 confidence. Don’t even get me started on this Jim. I adore him. I adore it all.
Date: April 29, 2022 08:43 pm Title: folklore
I have read several stories with angry Jim and Pam having a confrontation after Casino Night, but angry sex? Wow! That was SO HOT!!! And I love that Jim somehow has the strength to bump her fist afterwards like a version of their high-fives. LOL Awesome!
Date: December 30, 2021 01:58 pm Title: evermore
I'm kicking myself for not getting to reading this sooner! First of all, I love stories that hurt me, that leave me staring off into space and make me want to read them again instantly so I can feel the burn one more time. This is one of those painful stories (in the best of ways). One of the things I noticed right away was how you wove, so expertly, the lyrics of this haunting song into the words. So well done.
This line got to me: "And that’s probably what does it, she thinks, when she’s laying in bed later and replaying every second of what happens next."
and then you absolutely murdered me with: "She doesn’t look back as she leaves because she can’t stand to know whether or not he watches her."
Ughhh BT this was amazing.
Date: December 09, 2021 07:01 pm Title: evermore
Oof. Par excellance for the angst. That they were so close and yet still so far. Magnificent writing to bring that all out even if wrenches on the heart and won't stop.