This is a little disorienting to read, but I think that's because it's such an original and cool concept, and I'm sure I'll get used to it. It's cool to get only the slightest hints about what the story really contains and see how reactions unfold from there. Interested to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Semby--I was worried about that. I wanted the story to be told more through what the "author" was saying in the comments than through the actual story. I'll try to make that clearer in upcoming chapters. To be honest, sometimes when I'm writing it I'm confusing myself :) but I want to try to make it work. Thanks again for your feedback!

I keep reading the reviews and want to go read the story.  Then I remember this is a fanfic about a fanfic via reviews (ahhhhh).  Very interesting take and I really look forward to more. :)

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No, you know what, this really works. I absolutely did not expect to read something like this and have it a) fit in with the show and b) make sense, but it does both. Clever idea, funny fake SN's, and keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks singular_impatience. I'm glad to know that it works. Sometimes it gets confusing pretending a fictional character is actually a real person watching a fictional show that is actually real....but fictional. I think I just broke my own brain. Appreciate the comments.