Date: August 30, 2007 01:12 pm Title: Hate
I found out about this series from the TWoP boards. Very good! This is the first JAM story that I've seen that tackles such a sensitive subject matter like rape. It is interesting to see how two people who feel for each other like the characters Jim and Pam do, would handle such a situation. I am curious to see how it all will turn out. It's a good read!
Date: August 30, 2007 04:29 am Title: Hate
Amazing update...definitely not happy or fluffy, but the way you write this extremely sensitive topic with so much depth and personality is amazing to me. I'm so glad that you are updating this again. I hope by the end there's some kind of resolution, because while the angst is great, my heart still hurts for them
Can't wait for more
Date: August 30, 2007 03:22 am Title: Hate
Ooh, you're finally updating again! I was starting to wonder. ;)
You're a really good writer, and this is really painful, but I want to see Pam get through it. I want to see Jim help her with that. This chapter was just so emotional, with Jim breaking down in front of Pam's mom, it made me cry. I can't wait to see what's up next.
Date: August 29, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Hate
Oh Athena, you know I adore this story. It breaks my heart every time, but you do such a wonderful job with it. It was well worth the wait. I think for me, that scene between Jim and Pam's mom was just amazing. When she recounted what happened that night....ugh. I'm glad Jim was able to let it all out with her and cry. I can't imagine what things will be like when he and Pam finally reconnect...................oh and thank God for Mrs. Beesly telling him Pam loves him!
Author's Response: Hey thanks! That is so weird, I just reviewed your story, like, five seconds ago. Okay, this is getting creepy. . . .
Date: August 29, 2007 09:28 pm Title: Hate
oh. my. god. can't even begin to tell you about all the little small spots that got me right up in my throat and behind my lung. Jesus. And I love love love love where you took this chapter. Like I always do when I love a fic I read from the beginning and the last chapter made me think you were going to go in the direction of jim confronting pam some more but instead he went to pams mom. And oh my god that was just all hurt. The section where he realizes she prolly doesnt know anything else was so perfect. I was actually looking through his eyes at her feeling all those things. I could see through his eyes when they watered. Amazing stuff really. And just the two voices of pam. I know those and you got them so perfectley. It being esier to listen to the second voice and all that. Ok I really just wanted to tell you how amazing you are but I tend to ramble. So um YOU'RE AMAZING!
Date: August 29, 2007 09:05 pm Title: Hate
I'm so glad that you updated. I had started to think we would never get to see more, and that would be too bad, because this is so incredibly well done. I think you are very brave to take this on, and you've done it so respectfully and honestly. I hope that we can see more soon, and I can't wait to see how to handle this going on.
BTW, great image of Jim sitting outside her door knocking, breaks my heart, but beautiful.
Date: August 29, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Hate
i love this story. please dont make us wait forever. lol.
Date: August 29, 2007 04:26 pm Title: Hate
*stares at you in anticipation*
Very good!
Date: August 29, 2007 04:09 pm Title: Hate
That was totally worth the wait. I loved Jim breaking down with Pam's mom. And I think it is really good that they've connected, and can help Pam together (or at least share stories).
This story is so sad, but so compelling and wonderfully written. Thanks!
So excited you're going to be updating more regularly! :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Hate
Well, it was worth the wait! Keep them coming! This is really dark, but I love it.
Date: August 29, 2007 01:57 pm Title: Hate
This story is sad but outstanding!
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 11:04 am Title: Hate
I'm so glad you are able to update again. I just want to see Pam happy again. :-)
Date: August 29, 2007 10:55 am Title: Hate
Wow! So glad you updated! I had to re-read everything to remember exactly what happened, so that was a bonus. This story is so good, it literally makes my heart hurt. I can't wait to see what's coming next.
Date: August 29, 2007 09:57 am Title: Hate
ALLELUIA! An Update! If you truly promise to keep us updated we will put all our ninja stars and pepper spray away.
Awesome chapter, by the way. I can totally see Jim calling Pam's mom. She is Pam's best friend. I truly love this story, and I love you for 'really coming all the way back'.
Luchy
Date: August 29, 2007 09:35 am Title: Hate
I'm so glad you updated this! You have no idea how much I love this story. Please, please, please update more often!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 09:03 am Title: Hate
Sorry life has been so crazy for you, but so glad you updated! I can't believe how much I have been looking forward to an update of a Pam rape story but you are addressing it so well. And like so many of the other chapters, this one had me in tears for most of it.
Can't wait to see what comes next.
Date: August 29, 2007 08:43 am Title: Weak
Wow! This is so good. My heart is just aching for the two of them. Can't wait for next installment.
Date: August 29, 2007 07:44 am Title: Hate
Ahtena, THANK YOU! It was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next. I check twice a day, but no pressure. You are very talented. I like that Jim is feeling anything, even hate.
9 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 07:35 am Title: Hate
Wonderful! I've been waiting oh-so (im)patiently for an update to this great story. You do such a good job capturing the pain of this issue while still maintaining the characters in a realistic way. Fabulous work; I can't wait for the next chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 06:42 am Title: Weak
Oh man. This is really one of the most heartwrenching stories I've ever read, and I have to say I that I clicked on the story with a little trepidation. Not because of your writing skills or anything like that, but because this story just about killed me when I finished the most recent chapter a few months ago. This is really, really good, and I'm looking forward to the conclusion.
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 06:19 am Title: Hate
YOU UPDATED IT!!! SCORE!!
yeah. I've pretty much been waiting for this chapter all summer...
Date: August 12, 2007 11:20 am Title: Weak
I have to say that this is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I'm waiting (maybe not so) patiently for the next chapter.
Date: August 06, 2007 09:27 pm Title: Weak
Please update :(
Date: August 03, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Fear
Please finish!
Date: August 03, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Remorse
This is really gripping. A few grammatical errors are a little jarring but your handle on the characters is very good!