10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 12:46 am Title: Remorse
Oh goodness. I was reading this in a state of constant panic. My heart was beating so fast! The raw emotion Jim went through was so devastating. I think you wrote his reactions perfectly! This is all so painful! I really hope Pam realizes that she isn't less nor damaged! Please write fast!
9 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Guilt
wow, this is really very amazing. please continue soon!!
Date: May 14, 2007 04:31 pm Title: Guilt
my god I just re-read this whole thing again. Please continue find the inspiration to go on cause I really love this fic. Its just so amazing and well done and god, there's some good gush coming I feel it. And I need it after all the real depressing JAM on the office of late. Pleaseeee update soon.
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2007 07:52 pm Title: Guilt
This story is amazing. It's really touched me and I check every day for an update. In face your story is what finally pushed me to join so I could leave you some feedback. I really hope you continue with this story soon.
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you! Actually, I'm just finishing up the next chapter now. I'm gonna try and get it done before I go to bed. I hope it isn't a let down. But you should write something of your own so I could review! Thank you so much!
Date: May 02, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Guilt
This is all so terrible! Not the writing, the situation. I feel so bad for Pam, and even Jim! He must be worried sick! I hope he finds out soon so he can make it all better. Even though it might take years. Pam has to learn how to trust again. Gah!!! Continue! lol
10 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Guilt
Wow. I love this story - you've taken a really difficult subject and just.. wow. Please update soon.
10 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 04:55 pm Title: Guilt
I think this story is fantastic. I have never been so touched and felt so much from a fanfic. Please update soon... I am happy to beta if you need it.
Date: May 01, 2007 09:17 am Title: Weak
This broke my heart. You've painted such a believable pain and it really does affect the reader. Literally I felt ill for Pam, but that means you've done a really good job with this hard topic. Please update soon and hopefully Jim can be her shoulder to actually cry on.
Date: April 30, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Guilt
Guh, this is such a great fic...and so completely different from anything else I've read. I like that Jim just took the phone and is finding things out. He gis going to be so sick when he finds out; I feel bad for him already.
Date: April 30, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Guilt
OMG, I can NOT take it anymore that Jim doesn't know!!! I was so pissed at him when he got angry and stopped pressing Pam, but then I was hopeful again when he started listening to her messages. I can only hope that he finds out what the heck kind of support group she's going to and puts two and two together because it's KILLING me that he doesn't know!
Date: April 30, 2007 04:11 pm Title: Guilt
Wow, this is so powerful. Please update soon.
Date: April 30, 2007 03:06 pm Title: Guilt
Wow. "Enjoyed" of course is not quite the right term, but I'm not sure what the right term is.
This is certainly very good and well done. I'm interested to see how things go. I'm glad Jim listened to the cell phone messages.
Date: April 30, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Guilt
omg i am like in tears!! i love this dark story of pam. please let jim really help pam.
Date: April 30, 2007 09:13 am Title: Guilt
Oh my goodness. This story is soooooo sad, I hate that anyone would have to go through this. Even though it is very dark, it's very well written, so good job!
Date: April 30, 2007 07:32 am Title: Guilt
Good lord. Poor Pam! (I'm sure every chapter has that same response from me.) Ingenious way for Jim to get more info, BTW, listening to the voicemail. And him getting angry at Pam's non-response, but more angry at the hold Pam has over him (well, before he hears the messages) is so in character. I especially liked his inner dialogue as to why Pam is so special to him. *sigh* Someday.
Great story so far. More, please!
Date: April 30, 2007 06:18 am Title: Weak
This story is so well written. This is a topic that can easily go wrong with a lesser writer. I'm glad that you're not glossing over all the pain and anguish that goes through a victim's mind just to get to the Jim/Pam stuff. I think you've hit the nail right on the head in describing all of Pam's feelings. Really excited to see where you take this!
Date: April 30, 2007 05:36 am Title: Weak
I'm trying to keep away from the angst but this story offers a completely different type so I fnd myself sucked in.
The way you have Pam dealing with all of this is incredibly realistic. I myself haven't had this experience but I am close to those who have. I hope that later Pam can find the strength to come back from this. Preferrably with Jim's help of course.
Looking forward to an update.
Date: April 30, 2007 04:55 am Title: Guilt
This is how she lived. [maybe it would have been better if she had died.]
Crap, you're making me cry.
This is unbelievably - touching - if that's the right word, I can't even think straight right now - I mean, for something that I know so little about, this has reached for my throat, pulled it out, wrapped it around my neck and made me cry - or at the very least it makes me feel like someone's been repeatedly punching my grief bone. argh.
I loved all of this, though, for every bit that it's making me feel sad - from her messages, to her support group [ashamed - amazing], to Jim, asking Toby, being called sinner - AMAZING. Brilliant. For something so Pam-centred you've got some brilliant character from the rest of the lot, too. And I adored it.
And the Pam...I can't even begin to describe how much I love her. And this horrible, horrible mess of feelings, it's so far from the Pam we know, but we still see exactly why she's acting like she is and being like she is and that's even more hard-hitting than it already is, so. whoa.
I can hardly wait to read more - so you'd better write more!! :P
Date: April 30, 2007 01:14 am Title: Guilt
Brilliant and heartbreaking.... looking forward to more!
9 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 11:54 pm Title: Guilt
I'm really loving this fic and I get so excited when there is an update! I really like how even Michael is respecting Pam's privacy. I'm looking forward to Jim finding out and helping Pam recover.
Date: April 23, 2007 10:45 pm Title: Pain
Thankfully, I don't have any experience with that type of violence, but I feel you wrote it very believably. I could definitely picture it, and all I was thinking is, "I hope Jim can be the friend she needs to bring her back from this." And I'm sure he'll be perfect. It's just tough imagining this happening to poor Pam. :(
Date: April 22, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Pain
Oh man. This is just heartbreaking. Jim is going to want to shoot himself when he realizes what she wanted to tell him that day he blew her off. Boy oh boy this is tough. I'm interested though - so keep it up!
Date: April 21, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Pain
poor pam. Sorry, but that's all I can think to say. I desperately need you to continue this story, and quick!
8 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Weak
Wow. Poor Pam. Seriously. That sucks for her. I can only hope Jim will come in an make it all better. Very nicely written.