10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 10:06 am Title: Remorse
Oh. My. Goodness. This story is...amazing. Everything about it, the emotions of the parties that are involved and...wow. Keep updating! Please!
Date: May 16, 2007 09:33 am Title: Remorse
Jim's reaction was really real. I think you've captured everyone so well in thsi tragedy.
Date: May 16, 2007 08:51 am Title: Remorse
This is so powerful and moving. You're doing such a good job with it.
Date: May 16, 2007 08:50 am Title: Remorse
That was a great chapter. I think you did a good job of contrasting what Karen saw and what Jim was feeling. It's fair to say that Jim would be completely sick about what he'd found out and you wrote that well. Hope you can update soon :)
Date: May 16, 2007 08:14 am Title: Remorse
absoluely no garbage coming from here. were all our worst critics, this really was awesome, it got me all frazzled and upset, so thats a good sign.
(oh, and just one teeny correction, "how she beamed when he finally excepted." In that form it should read accepted. Not a huge deal, but I don't want the grammar Nazis to come after you...they are scaarry.)
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you! Ya know, the horrible part is that I'm an English major, and I knew the correct spelling, I just completely forgot. Thank you for pointing that out, I really missed that!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 06:49 am Title: Remorse
You can't take this long to update anymore! I really like how you've captured Jim's emotions and his desperation. You really have to update faster; this story is wonderful and honest to the feelings/situation you're trying to capture. Well done.
Date: May 16, 2007 06:20 am Title: Remorse
This story is AMAZING...horrible topic don't get me wrong but you put so much feeling and emotion in it, just amazing. I think you nailed Jim's reaction, so profoundly affected by the revelation that he can't even function....I can't wait to see what happens when he finally sees Pam
MORE SOON!
Date: May 16, 2007 05:51 am Title: Remorse
I feel funny saying that I'm enjoying this story because well......Pam. But this is insanely good. So well written. I look forward to your next installments.
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 12:46 am Title: Remorse
Oh goodness. I was reading this in a state of constant panic. My heart was beating so fast! The raw emotion Jim went through was so devastating. I think you wrote his reactions perfectly! This is all so painful! I really hope Pam realizes that she isn't less nor damaged! Please write fast!
9 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Guilt
wow, this is really very amazing. please continue soon!!
Date: May 14, 2007 04:31 pm Title: Guilt
my god I just re-read this whole thing again. Please continue find the inspiration to go on cause I really love this fic. Its just so amazing and well done and god, there's some good gush coming I feel it. And I need it after all the real depressing JAM on the office of late. Pleaseeee update soon.
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2007 07:52 pm Title: Guilt
This story is amazing. It's really touched me and I check every day for an update. In face your story is what finally pushed me to join so I could leave you some feedback. I really hope you continue with this story soon.
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you! Actually, I'm just finishing up the next chapter now. I'm gonna try and get it done before I go to bed. I hope it isn't a let down. But you should write something of your own so I could review! Thank you so much!
Date: May 02, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Guilt
This is all so terrible! Not the writing, the situation. I feel so bad for Pam, and even Jim! He must be worried sick! I hope he finds out soon so he can make it all better. Even though it might take years. Pam has to learn how to trust again. Gah!!! Continue! lol
10 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Guilt
Wow. I love this story - you've taken a really difficult subject and just.. wow. Please update soon.
10 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 04:55 pm Title: Guilt
I think this story is fantastic. I have never been so touched and felt so much from a fanfic. Please update soon... I am happy to beta if you need it.
Date: May 01, 2007 09:17 am Title: Weak
This broke my heart. You've painted such a believable pain and it really does affect the reader. Literally I felt ill for Pam, but that means you've done a really good job with this hard topic. Please update soon and hopefully Jim can be her shoulder to actually cry on.
Date: April 30, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Guilt
Guh, this is such a great fic...and so completely different from anything else I've read. I like that Jim just took the phone and is finding things out. He gis going to be so sick when he finds out; I feel bad for him already.
Date: April 30, 2007 09:06 pm Title: Guilt
OMG, I can NOT take it anymore that Jim doesn't know!!! I was so pissed at him when he got angry and stopped pressing Pam, but then I was hopeful again when he started listening to her messages. I can only hope that he finds out what the heck kind of support group she's going to and puts two and two together because it's KILLING me that he doesn't know!
Date: April 30, 2007 04:11 pm Title: Guilt
Wow, this is so powerful. Please update soon.
Date: April 30, 2007 03:06 pm Title: Guilt
Wow. "Enjoyed" of course is not quite the right term, but I'm not sure what the right term is.
This is certainly very good and well done. I'm interested to see how things go. I'm glad Jim listened to the cell phone messages.
Date: April 30, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Guilt
omg i am like in tears!! i love this dark story of pam. please let jim really help pam.
Date: April 30, 2007 09:13 am Title: Guilt
Oh my goodness. This story is soooooo sad, I hate that anyone would have to go through this. Even though it is very dark, it's very well written, so good job!
Date: April 30, 2007 07:32 am Title: Guilt
Good lord. Poor Pam! (I'm sure every chapter has that same response from me.) Ingenious way for Jim to get more info, BTW, listening to the voicemail. And him getting angry at Pam's non-response, but more angry at the hold Pam has over him (well, before he hears the messages) is so in character. I especially liked his inner dialogue as to why Pam is so special to him. *sigh* Someday.
Great story so far. More, please!
Date: April 30, 2007 06:18 am Title: Weak
This story is so well written. This is a topic that can easily go wrong with a lesser writer. I'm glad that you're not glossing over all the pain and anguish that goes through a victim's mind just to get to the Jim/Pam stuff. I think you've hit the nail right on the head in describing all of Pam's feelings. Really excited to see where you take this!
Date: April 30, 2007 05:36 am Title: Weak
I'm trying to keep away from the angst but this story offers a completely different type so I fnd myself sucked in.
The way you have Pam dealing with all of this is incredibly realistic. I myself haven't had this experience but I am close to those who have. I hope that later Pam can find the strength to come back from this. Preferrably with Jim's help of course.
Looking forward to an update.