Date: April 16, 2007 04:09 pm Title: Weak
ooo! This is good!....I mean, getting raped is definately NOT good...the story is.
Date: April 16, 2007 12:18 pm Title: Weak
i liked it, sad, but in a well-written thoughtful kind of way.
Date: April 16, 2007 11:11 am Title: Weak
massively interesting piece, here. do write more.
Date: April 16, 2007 08:49 am Title: Weak
Oh how sad. This is a very good start. I'd love to see where this is going. Please continue!
Date: April 16, 2007 08:44 am Title: Weak
Ok I'm really really interested. This has so much juicy plot scene possibilities I'm salivating, and your a fab writer and I bet its just gonna be so filling. Ok I'm obviously really hungry should eat food. Just had to share my excitement.
Date: April 16, 2007 08:32 am Title: Weak
You're a great writer. I could feel Pam's uncomfort in the Jan situation, and then the whole office knowing. Please update soon.
Date: April 16, 2007 07:56 am Title: Weak
You are right... this a dark fiction. But it has captured my interest and I am very much enjoying this first chapter. Please add more soon.
10 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 06:11 am Title: Weak
aw, where's chapter 2?:) Great work!
Date: April 16, 2007 05:57 am Title: Weak
Hey, I like poor Pam stories. :-) I really like your voice--and the way you described Jan . . . "Jan’s head is tilted up, gazing down at her with squinting eyes." I got that perfect mental image of her in the conference room with Pam. I'd really like to read more . . . keep going!
9 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 04:10 am Title: Weak
I don't know why but I'm already in love with this story - maybe it's the Disney kid in me who sees a damsel in distress and Jim as the only one who can bring her out of that - but that doesn't make sense, but I'm pretty sure Disney movies don't mention rape victims...hmm.
Anyway, I love how you've described the Jim/Pam dynamic, how you've written Jan and Michael and even mentioned Toby, and most of all, Pam - pampampam. It's freaking heartbreaking, and
I love this story already, strange reasons! And I'm keeping track of it all the way through. All the way through.
Now I'm going to go cry and hope you make Jim/Pam take a step closer, right NOW, because she can't do any of this on her own. can she?
OK, I won't be crying, but I'll still be eagerly waiting a new chapter! Update ASAP. I am fully serious.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you very much! I hope there are no rape victim's in Disney movies. That would be kind of a bummer. Glad you liked the story!
6 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 03:50 am Title: Weak
This isn't usually the kind of fic I go for, but I have to admit I'm intrigued. I'd love to see some of this from Jim's perspective. New chapter soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm thinking about the next chapter being from Jim's perspective. Great minds think alike, right? Thanks!
Date: April 16, 2007 12:43 am Title: Weak
I'm intrigued. I love darky angsty stuff occasionally too, and I can't wait to see how Jim reacts to all this.
9 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 12:25 am Title: Weak
The Jam dynamic you've captured here is heartwrenching and worth every tear shed in the reading of it. Completely unique and absolutely stunning---please do continue.
Date: April 15, 2007 11:40 pm Title: Weak
Oh my. Poor Pam. And it looks like now Jim knows and that's got to be breaking his heart.
Date: April 15, 2007 11:22 pm Title: Weak
Oh, what a terrible thing for her to go through! Poor Pam! I'm really interested to see where this goes!
Date: April 15, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Weak
This is kind of dark...but I'm intrigued. Please continue.