Date: August 11, 2008 11:53 pm Title: Weak
Hi! It's me again, your crazy stalker fan. Haha, just kidding. But yeah, I just saw that you responded to my last review! I'm sorry about your hand, and your family crisis. I hope everything is okay.
Anyway, I was re-reading your story again (but really, what else am I to do? There are no other stories out there like this that are THIS good). Every time I come back to read this story again, it just blows me away. I always catch something I missed before, and it becomes so much more profound and heart-breaking and beautiful.
You had this one line in your last chapter that I just noticed for the first time. About how the problems that Jim has are the ones that never crossed his troubled mind. And I love that line soooo much, because it's so similar to this other line from a song I love. It's called "Everybody's Free To Wear Sun-Screen" by Baz Lurhman. If you haven't heard of it, you should really look it up, I think you'd love it, too. I don't see how you couldn't. Anyway, that song has a line that goes, "The real troubles in your life are apt to be things that never crossed your worried mind, the kind that blindside you at four pm on some idle Tuesday." Kind of like how Jim found out about Pam. Or like that episode that was actually called Blindsided on 21 Jump Street when that girl offered Johnny Depp money to kill her father who was molesting her.
Anywho, I want you to know that your story is so amazing that I have an endless supply of patience when it comes to waiting for an update. I want you to take your time, cause I know it's tough. I just hope you don't give up on this baby. It's really something.
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2008 11:07 pm Title: Worry
You need to publish an original and become the next "World's Greatest Author of Love Stories!"
rating = 10+++++++++++
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2008 10:51 pm Title: Patience
I'm on a journey in your story and love the way it's heading........
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2008 10:25 pm Title: Confusion
I love it! Pam is going to get better! It's a "PROCESS"! And I hope it will happen, got to go. The next chapter is waiting for me.....
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2008 08:49 pm Title: Hate
I'm headed to the next chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2008 08:20 pm Title: Fear
This chapter was fantastic! The emotions both displayed were so sad! You really have a way of getting someones emotions out and I can see them as you describe them.
Date: August 08, 2008 12:29 am Title: Worry
Every time I read this story, I start bawling. It's so incredible. Thank you.
10 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2008 08:16 pm Title: Worry
Wow, so this is amazing. I really love it. It made me cry like 3 times. (Which rocks.) And I really hope you update because its AMAZING and SO great. So, please, this is my shameless begging, please update? It would rock my world.
Date: July 03, 2008 06:33 pm Title: Weak
I'm new to this site and just read this story in one sitting. I understand why you haven't been able to...hope your hand improves soon. While I agree the subject matter is dark, there is a lot of love in this story.
Date: June 11, 2008 04:31 am Title: Worry
This is one of the most intriguing stories on MTT. I sincerely hope that you are better soon and able to finish. God bless you. :) You're a wonderful writer.
10 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2008 12:43 am Title: Weak
I've been wondering why you never finished this story. It is so dark but so good! I'm sorry your life has been full of your own crises lately. I hope things get better and your hand heals! I'll look forward to reading more when you're able to write again.
Date: May 14, 2008 11:41 pm Title: Worry
Hi! I hope you haven't forgotten about us! I'm just going crazy wondering what happens with Jim and Pam. I can imagine a million different scenes in my head, but I know none of them could possibly live up to whatever you'll come up with. Because this story always blows me away. Every single time I read it, which has been many, many times. See, what happens is the waiting drives me insane, so I just come back and re-read what's already here and just find more reasons love it.
So, please take your time, but do update. I am just so invested in this story. Love you!
Author's Response: Aw! I love you too. No, I haven't forgotten about this story. But the last few months have been hard. I had a family crisis, and I injured my hand, so it's been hard to type. Then both of my hands got chopped off, my car exploded, and a tornado hit my house. . .Well, the first two reallly did happen, but you get the idea. But thank you so much for the encouragement. I will finish this as soon as I am able to. It's been killing me because I want to update, but my life got some things going on. You have no idea what your and everyone elses reviews do to me.
Date: May 08, 2008 06:41 am Title: Worry
You are amazing. I just read these nine chapters at once. I seriously couldn't stop. To be honest, I'm speechless. All I can say is just, I really love this story. And I really, really hope you'll update soon. And you're right; this story brings up a lot of emotions and therefore it's brilliant. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant!!!! Just, BRILLIANT!
9 [Report This]Date: May 05, 2008 08:09 pm Title: Weak
I just read this, and realized it hasn't been updated since January! Please finish it. It's such a compelling story! I'm not above begging for an update!
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2008 03:00 am Title: Worry
WOW. I'm floored by this story. Please please finish it! This is so good, just very very good. Wow.
Date: April 24, 2008 06:30 am Title: Weak
Oh no. I just saw that this hasn't been updated since January. Don't leave me hanging! I just read the story and fell in love with it. It's amazingly beautiful. It's nice to see a fic that, though dark, doesn't have Jim and Pam abusing each other for their mistakes. Here we just have Jim honestly caring for Pam. I love it.
10 [Report This]Date: April 17, 2008 01:32 am Title: Worry
Update update update! You're killing me here! I've read through every chapter about 698459485309 times now, I need more!
Date: March 30, 2008 01:12 pm Title: Worry
Another shameless plug – pardon the pun! – this story is #4 on the Top 10 Most Favorites list ... So, I can't be the only one hoping for another installment!
Author's Response: I'm number 4? Are you serious? Wow! I had no idea. . . Thank you for the nudge, I guess I really need it. Vampiric Blood. . you rock so hard right now! Thank you for the review and the support.
10 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2008 01:09 pm Title: Worry
Hmm … are you still checking on your reviews? Just thought I'd post a request for another chapter. This is a really good story. You should finish it!
Date: March 24, 2008 11:57 pm Title: Worry
I've been reading this story religiously since it first started. It is absolutely fantastic. Please update soon. I'm dying here...
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 09:11 pm Title: Worry
Wow. This story is literally the best fanfic of Jim and Pam I've ever read. I cried. Seriously, you've done an amazing job. Please write more. You have a gift. :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 09:44 am Title: Weak
Update? This is definitely one of the best on here and I just can't wait for the next chapter. Very realistic!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 05:06 pm Title: Worry
This is a very well written story for the topic...and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: February 21, 2008 04:25 pm Title: Worry
Oh my god. I just realized that I never reviewed this chapter. I could've sworn that I did, but apparently I didn't. How did THAT happen?
Okay, so let me just tell how freaking awesome this chapter is! I love it! And I totally understand about you just wanting to write about Jim and Pam in love and making babies, because I know I want to read about Jim and Pam in love making babies. LOL.
But I'm really glad your not just making her wake up one day totally fine. It's so much more real, this way. Like Pam's sex dream, it was so amazingly beautiful and touching. Because it really wasn't about sex. It was about lots of things. And I'm really happy with the way you ended the chapter, too. It wasn't too big a gesture or anything, it was small and simple and it just meant so much.
Oh, and to respond to your response to my last comment (that's a funny sentence): This is actually the first rape fanfic I've ever read for The Office. I just meant in general, for other shows and stuff, they usually either completely breeze past the issue and the character gets over it in like, less than a day, or they go over the top and it's just kinda ridiculous. And the reason why I give such encouraging comments, I think, is because I did write a rape fanfiction for a different show. And it took me over a year, and it was really difficult, and I hated every chapter. So I just understand how hard it is.
But your story is so amazingly beautiful, and it's so touching, and it's got so much heart. And I know everyone is really excited to see what happens next.
So YAY again! Can't wait for the update!