1 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2020 10:54 am Title: Chapter 13
Disappointed this stops here - I first read it on FFN and I was thrilled to find it was a) posted here and b) extended. Darker than my usual tastes, but the prose here is excellent.
1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2019 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
Well this is weird and intentionally referential and dark, but I like it anyway. Thanks for this exploration of the psyche.
Date: January 29, 2010 08:31 am Title: Chapter 13
Do you completed any of the stories you poseted!?
Date: January 29, 2010 07:48 am Title: Chapter 3
I like it so far.
That line form Mark "We always did feel the same, we just saw it from a different point of view" is from "Tangled up in Blue" by Bob Dylan... But you probably already knew that.
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2007 06:57 am Title: Chapter 13
This is awesome....and freaky. It's freakin' awesome! Keep going,please.
Date: July 24, 2007 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 12
I really like this chapter!
Jim better not be killing himself right now, though. Breakfast is coming, plus I think Pam just paid the piper...
8 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
Holy left turn, Batman! This story has caught me completely off guard. Get Jim to a therapist ASAP! And hello, freaky quarter guy!?! What was that.
Date: July 24, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
What? I hope you update soon!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2007 07:34 am Title: Chapter 12
Oooooh....freaky!
10 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2007 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
This story is dark and weird but I love it. I really mean that in the best way possible. I applaud you for having the guts to write something that is so completely different from anything in this fandom, and to do it so well. Kudos.
Date: July 23, 2007 07:31 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh no, just when we thought Jim was in the clear...
Date: July 22, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Oh my gosh! You've just shocked me; I had no idea you were going this way. I did not expect that. At all!
Now I'm really wondering what you're going to do next. You're a sick, sick person, injoy. I'll be watching for an update. This just blew me away (in an astounded but good way). Wow.
Date: July 17, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hooray! I love the candy bit, and that she's taking him home. If I were here, I'd never let him out of my sight. Well, at least without making sure he was feeling verrry secure about how I felt...
Date: July 16, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hey, you're back! Glad you haven't forgotten about us. Or Jim & Pam. Now, of course, I'm sucked back in & wanting to see where else you are taking us...
7 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
I like your real as much as I like your nothing. The last paragraph was so beautiful and romantic - especially loved this line - "When their lips met, they were alone and content to never be anywhere else."
Date: April 30, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
woah. good stuff. he just woke up all of a sudden and for a second there i couldn't decide whether he was dying or waking up. great job with that chapter.
Date: April 30, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
Phew, for being back in the real. I need tangibles, baby!
I really like seeing Pam's POV here. And I love the subtle mention of being a permanent designated driver.
And thank you for a JAM kiss. May we see this in season 3. (Pray to Thor himself.)
Date: April 29, 2007 10:37 am Title: Chapter 8
injoy, the writing is really beautiful, but I'm hoping you start easing away from the esoteric and back into some facing-Pam-time. (Kev ducks as injoy throws garbage at her.)
Can Pam pull Jim away from the Nothing?
(Have you seen A Neverending Story? The Nothing is taking over. There's a book too, but I haven't read it. "Okay. Thought people read more books." (/Jim) Anyway, every time I see your title, I always think of the Neverending Story.)
What's next? Is that boat going to make its way to a... PamPort? (Groan.)
Date: April 25, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I never thought about the parallel between Jim finding out that Pam was engaged and Pam being told by Jim that he was dating someone. Good call!
9 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
I am really enjoying this. It's "tone" reminds me of something I read on FF last year called "The Eraser". Before then I never realized that I liked stories like this - dark, intense, mysterious, near-death or after-death experiences. I'm anxious for the next chapter. Great job.
Date: April 25, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
Interesting. Choose life, Jim! Choose Pam! It is kind of esoteric, as you mentioned in the last chapter, but works.
I was just wondering earlier today what was happening with this story!
Author's Response: i'm a sort of lazy writer, so that's what took so long. been thinking on this chapter for the last few days, finally got it written. now, need to think on the next few chapters. much respect, and thanks for the reviews.
Date: April 25, 2007 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, Sympathy for the Devil reference, am I right? Its darker than what I normally read, but I like it! :)
Date: April 20, 2007 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yay, Mark!
Date: April 19, 2007 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
aww i love that last line. she would definately be what keeps him from the nothing.
10 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow! That was so beautifully written! I love the way you write Mark too, but I am still not clear why he stays. Is it just to watch out for Pam or what? anyway you did a great job with this I can't wait to read the rest!