Date: March 04, 2024 04:00 am Title: Hot Girl : Make Me Laugh
Great ending!
1 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2024 03:56 am Title: Basketball : Second Best
Great chapter. A male is a fianc?, a female is a fianc?e. :)
1 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2024 03:40 am Title: Diversity Day: Dreaming Of You
Love this!
1 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2024 03:38 am Title: Pilot: Break My Heart
Lovely!
9 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Hot Girl : Make Me Laugh
Great story. I think that the thoughts you have for them are very plausible and true to character. Thanks!
Date: April 30, 2007 02:25 pm Title: Basketball : Second Best
This was really really good. I really like these, keep them up!
Date: April 29, 2007 09:03 pm Title: Hot Girl : Make Me Laugh
Why in the world do you have only three reviews this fic is awesome. Your writing is perfectly styled for Jim and Pam. It’s heartbreaking really. I love the basketball chapter. I love this chapter. I love all the chapters. Well done. Just like I like em'.
Date: April 28, 2007 12:30 am Title: Alliance : Laughing and Guilt
Love:
You can’t wait to run upstairs and tell Jim every single detail, can’t wait to see the big smile that lights his face, or that laugh that will fill the air. You just can’t wait to see him.
And that scares you beyond belief.
For such a simple premise--fleshing out scenes we all know and love--this is more intricate than I expected. I'm really enjoying it. :)
Date: April 28, 2007 12:28 am Title: Health Care: One Voice
Sigh. So sweet. This is my favorite line:
The girl you wish you could call your girl.
Date: April 27, 2007 10:25 pm Title: Diversity Day: Dreaming Of You
What a great interpretation of why Pam rushed away so quickly after Jim woke her up--so cute!
By the way, I think you must've started writing this in first person and then switched, because you missed a change here:
You remind myself that he’s just your friend.