Reviews For The New Copy Machine
Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 
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Date: December 17, 2020 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
1 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2020 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
You are wildly underrated in this fandom.
Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Maybe they can do a flashback to this in the new season. I know I wouldn't complain.
Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2006 04:25 am Title: Chapter 1
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2006 04:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I think I might have read this a while ago, maybe on fanfiction.net, and I just love it. I totally got the whole "aspire" thing, and I think it's really creative and perfect.
Also; hot. So, so hot.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2006 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: July 27, 2006 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is pretty good writing, even if slightly out of character, but one thing takes me out of it — you're using the verb 'aspire' incorrectly, and since the ending kind of revolves around it (plus I'm a bit of a grammar nazi :P), it bothers me when I read it. Just some constructive criticism for the future. Thanks for sharing!