1 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2020 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1
The connection between cold feet/Pam's hesitance and Pam's growth literally culminating in a coal walk desperately needed to be made. That's genius.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I feel like it couldn't have been a coincidence, right? No more cold feet for Pam, who is finally being brave.
Date: July 16, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was pretty cool. I can't quite say what I love about it, but, it still is cool. And that is why its a short review.
Author's Response: This may be the shortest review you've ever left me. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: May 20, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really loved this! Great joining of metaphors.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
"The fire had burned her skin, and her declaration had left her cheeks rosy with a flush of excitement that she thought might never fade". This was a beautiful story. I love Pam's reaction to her declaration.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think the firewalk was the defining moment for Pam, even more than cancelling her wedding.
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2007 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
You know, I never made the connection between her cold feet and walking on coals, but having read this, I'm almost certain it wasn't an accident. This was terrific - love the metaphor you're sustaining throughout.
Beautiful, understated, succinct - as usual! You ROCK.
Author's Response: Thank you! It seems like a silly metaphor for them to use, but it just resonated with me. "As usual" is just such a lovely thing to say. YOU rock. Thanks again!
Date: May 14, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice execution of the metaphor! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: May 14, 2007 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful and joyful, just like Pam's big moment!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! You know I just love writing Pam.
Date: May 14, 2007 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw! This was really sweet. I love that she's so happy in the end. That's such a good way to link her speech with the bus ride, which I was having trouble connecting at first. Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm actually one who thinks the final bus ride was supposed to be a flashback (like the end of Diwali, for example), but I thought she looked positively joyful when she skipped out of the circle to walk in the water. Thank you so very much!
Date: May 14, 2007 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful imagery. I love the many interpretations of "cold feet" and how you played with them all. No socks! Yay!
Author's Response: Pam is officially sock-free! Woo! (Thank you!)
Date: May 14, 2007 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1
That's an interesting metaphor I hadn't thought about. This was a great piece. Team Pam! :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you!! Yeah, I'm all about the odd metaphor. Go Team Pam!!
Date: May 14, 2007 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1
That was totally fab. Short but sweet. I love Pam's introspection, and the way you summed everything up so succinctly. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing Pam POV.
Date: May 14, 2007 06:45 am Title: Chapter 1
This is just beautiful!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!
Date: May 14, 2007 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow -- great metaphor! Go Pam!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried about Pam's poor feet, but I think they'll be fine.
Date: May 14, 2007 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Very Pam. I totally can see her wearing socks to bed with Roy but I doubt she would with Jim. ;)
Author's Response: Hee. Well, maybe socks, but maybe not much else!
Date: May 14, 2007 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this. The imagery is fabulous. Just great!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!