1 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2025 11:43 am Title: Everybody at the Bar Gettin' Tipsy
This plot couldn't be more fun! I forgot how enjoyable your writing is, I love the inner monologue so much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
1 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2025 04:48 pm Title: Everybody at the Bar Gettin' Tipsy
This is so fun!! First of all, I always love a Real Pam. Anyone who thinks she’s exactly same outside of the office just isn’t paying attention. So this fun, flirty, laidback side of her is a great read.
I giggled as the oh my/good lords continued. I think she broke Jim’s brain!
And when she SLUT dropped and then WINKED?! Ma’am. I gasped so loud that my family asked what I was reading. Never mind I told them it was the news.
These canon divergent one shots are glorious things of beauty. I’m so glad you listened to Coley. She’s a terrible influence in all the right ways and this fandom is the beneficiary of her skilled peer pressure.
Author's Response: Ok this made me laugh so much. I’m glad I could make you gasp though.
1 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2025 12:17 pm Title: Everybody at the Bar Gettin' Tipsy
Absolute perfection as always, my love! If only this was the way the dundies actually ended. We can dream.
You said there was no room for smut in this. Excuse me? She was touching his dick and grinding up on him. IRWT and me are fuming. Fuming, I say!
Everytime there was a Oh My, Good Lord, the voice in my head had to go deep like Shaboozy. I dont think im ever going to read those words in any other way now, thanks for that!
Did you know A Party For Two is a Shania Twain song.
You aced this, babes. Now onto those other ones your wonderful brain thought up!
Author's Response:
Well thank you thank you thank you. Soz for the lack of smut. It’ll come soon enough. Twss
And no! I didn’t know about Party for Two. The more you know!
1 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2025 11:02 am Title: Everybody at the Bar Gettin' Tipsy
I’m so proud of you and this fic. It makes me happy to know that we can support each other when it comes to writing. I GOT YOU, BABY GIRL.
Also, this story was just… chef’s kiss. I cannot wait for what you have for us next, my darling.
Now lemme just slut drop and leave you some jellies.
Author's Response:
You are my homie girl. You’re the one that keeps me writing, so if anything, this fic is kinda yours because it wouldn’t be here without you. Maybe you just write the next one for me?
Thanks for the slut drop and the beans
1 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2025 07:41 am Title: Everybody at the Bar Gettin' Tipsy
"No one ever tells you how you're supposed to react when your best friend kisses you. Or more to the point, how you're supposed to react when your best friend, who you're also in love with, kisses you." What a great way to start this off! Immediately, I want more.
One of my favorite Jims is when he can't say no to Pam and man, he really can't say no to her here and them going to another bar feels both like the best and maybe the worst idea - just kidding, it's obviously the best idea. Good thinking, Pam.
""It's very fun," I smile with a nudge of my own elbow. I mean, it's more than fun. It's the highlight of my week. Hell, the highlight of my year. But I can't exactly tell her that. I can't hide the smile on my face though, especially with the crazy big grin she's giving me. "What?" I ask her. "What?" she laughs. She keeps looking at me while biting her lip." Okay THIS moment just has me grinning at my computer. It's fine. I'm fine. They're very cute together, that's all.
And then you do this thing - this really tiny but also monumental thing where in the middle of her rapidly increasing tipsiness, Jim sees her moments of clarity in her rambling about not buying a Birkin but pursuing art. I don't know, I just really liked that.
You know what else I really like? Drunk handsy Pam - can't blame a girl at all for any of it.
"It's your turn." How dare you.
Ha! Good Lord indeed... Jim's so screwed. That's the thought I had at the beginning of the story and the thought I had at the very end. What a treat this was to read!
If this is what we get when I *gently insist* that someone write something, then everybody should listen to me all of the time. Because this? Is so, so, so great. Just like I knew it would be!
Author's Response: Ok so yes I should obviously listen to you more often because this was a lot of fun to write and got the idea out of my head to make space for new fics. Dammit.
1 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2025 05:17 pm Title: Everybody at the Bar Gettin' Tipsy
Well that was delightfully forward of her. Though how they'll both feel in the morning remains to be seen. Still great fun to see them like this. Finally realize how much they mean to each other and go for it. Lots of fun.
Author's Response:
I've got a feeling they'll still be drunk at 10am (iykyk)
Glad you liked this and thanks for the review!
Date: December 20, 2024 07:01 am Title: You Got That James Dean Daydream Look in Your Eye
You're way with words is truly 💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!!! You’ve really made my day saying that!!
So happy you liked it!
1 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2024 11:20 pm Title: You Got That James Dean Daydream Look in Your Eye
this was so good!! i see what you did and honestly the way that you put in the lyrics was so smooth. loved it sm!
Author's Response: Ahh! Thank you SO much! That's really made my day! Thank you so much for the review and glad you liked it!!
1 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2024 09:45 pm Title: You Got That James Dean Daydream Look in Your Eye
Super cute little slice of life. Pam can't keep her eyes off him. He can't keep his hands off her. And between all that, a fun and easy costume for Jim. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
Date: November 02, 2024 06:40 pm Title: You Got That James Dean Daydream Look in Your Eye
Also, yes, “ya’ll” was used correctly. Very proud.
Author's Response: Well thank god for that. I'm learning.
1 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2024 06:39 pm Title: You Got That James Dean Daydream Look in Your Eye
First time reading a fic in awhile, due to life really dumping on me lately, but this… was so refreshing, and full of those little moments that made my tummy do that swoopy thing when something is just so cutely Jim/Pam… that it cannot physically be contained. I loved it. Brilliant. As always. I would, once again, call the Louvre but they have me on a “no trespass” order… Pfff… bunch of snail eaters.
Author's Response: I hope this helped a little with the awfulness of life and took you away for a little moment. Thanks for trying to call the Louvre, they're probably out of space now anyways. Pfft indeed. Thanks for your lovely words as always. Sending big hugs x
1 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2024 07:03 am Title: You Got That James Dean Daydream Look in Your Eye
Okay well this is 100% the kind of treat I want for Halloween! This is flirty and funny and Jammy and holiday and everything perfectly you! You know I’ve been trying to NOT beg for your fan fic but I miss it soooooo much! I know it’s been a long year and I’m so excited that you found something this darling to inspire you!
I personally find Jim’s non costumes quite clever but I also understand Pam’s frustration at showing up at a party with a costumeless boyfriend no matter how delish he is. I have my own little head canon of Angela staring at Jam shamefully as they come in late yet again, as well!
I did Google pics of James Dean and I CAN see Jim as him— and actually, don’t you think Pam could argue that he’s not even “dressing up”— he’s still a James. I think we need a follow up post party with Pam’s costume effects on Jim but also cause I really wanna see how she dressed with the tight skirt and red lip look that Jim likes. I love your song-based fics as you do the lyrics such justice!
This was so cute, so sexy, so fun, so Jam, and so you! So glad you’re back, and mostly, so glad your year is better, friend. You know I love you and can I beta?? I want to sneak peek! Happy Halloween and thanks for such fun Halloween Jam! Lots of love to you always.
Author's Response: I don't know how you do it but your reviews are always more than the chapter!! So thank you thank you! And I'm glad you enjoyed it!
1 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2024 03:17 am Title: You Got That James Dean Daydream Look in Your Eye
Fun story, thanks!! Really enjoyed this Halloween Treat, glad it wasn’t a Trick!
Author's Response: Hurray! So happy you liked it! Thanks for the review and jelly!
1 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2024 11:20 am Title: Nobody Likes You When You're Twenty Three
I love this meet for Jim and Pam! The crayons! And how he wants to be with a girl who will laugh at that kinda stuff with him... loved it! Solid work old boy.
Author's Response: Well thank you, you old chair
1 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2024 07:28 am Title: Nobody Likes You When You're Twenty Three
Freaking adorable!! Poor Jim always being told to grow up!
Author's Response: Aww thank you!
1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2024 07:53 pm Title: Nobody Likes You When You're Twenty Three
So this is just an adorable meet-cute for Jim and Pam. That Pam was already in the pranking business before Jim got there was a great little detail. I mean, lets face it, it was love at first prank.
Everyone telling Jim to grow up seems to ring true though. Jim was kind of childish those first couple of seasons. Makes sense he'd have been even more so pre-camera. Nice way to show that there was growth as the doc went on.
Tons of fun for sure with this one. Loved it.
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it :)
1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2024 04:03 am Title: Nobody Likes You When You're Twenty Three
This is hysterical!
Author's Response: Ah thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
1 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2023 06:13 am Title: A Perfect Night
I just listened to this song this morning after recently rereading and you have done such Jam justice to illustrating this awesome Ed Sheeran song! I love that Jim tries to do an English accent because our Galway Girl Pam absolutely does fall in love with an Englishman! Such sweet Jam callbacks too: Office Olympics, the air high fives, the bird funeral, Pam’s Irish Center mural commission, and the Night Out pool game! You blended Jam so well into the bones of this song!
Per usual, you write their chemistry so well. Their eye contact, glances, gazes, and little touches, including Jim’s sexy thumb swipe of Pam’s song-specific drink off her lower lip is just divine! And I love where you fit in the “Gaelic ink” too!
I loved the dance floor chemistry and it seemed like they were doing a lot more than swaying!! The cab ride home, Pam asking Jim to walk him home was also perfect. I love that they just slip into Helene babysitting and the family life and your sweet explanation of Pam’s newfound Irish heritage. What a fun night for them! And then we slip back to Galway Girl with the Doritos and wine reference. In my mind this is set pre finale pre Austin, and I love this little glimpse into that sweet and romantic portion of their life when they realize that they are indeed each other’s home, wherever they are. I hope after they danced they had another nice night leading to an even better morning! So great! But everything you do always is, friend!
Just missed Ed Sheeran in town as he was here but I was at my family reunion— AND he showed up with Eminem!!! Next time! I love Ed Sheeran in concert and anywhere and this is so great! You can adapt another Ed Sheeran song to Jam whenever you want!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, as always for your wonderful review. I love that you got literally every reference in the song! I think this is going to be my only Ed Sheeran fic I’m afraid (seeing as I don’t know many other songs 🤣) but I’m so happy you liked this! Thank you again!!
1 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2023 09:22 am Title: The Angel from my Nightmare
I usually try to avoid season 9 fanfics but this is so good! You got Jim’s mindset during that arc quite accurate I feel. Jim was a mix of wanting something more than his crappy office job and want something more for his little family. But at the same time miss his family so much that there is a part of him that want to throw it all away so he can just be with Pam and their kids. He wanted it all his dream job and the cookie-cutter-white-picket-fence family of four with the love of his life. There are only three people he would dress up for (Pam, Cece and Phillip). Love the parallel to Jack and Sally.
A jellybean for you!
Author's Response:
Ah thank you so much! This was something new I had never done before in terms of an inner monologue, so glad you liked it!
Thanks for the review!
1 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2022 01:42 pm Title: Marley's Chains
Proud, but grumpy.
Author's Response: I'm sorry x
Date: November 08, 2022 01:28 pm Title: Marley's Chains
I can’t help but be curious about how Jim
found out about Pam’s death, and his actual reaction/breakdown.
Also seeing the situation from Karen’s POV
could be interesting because even though I’m
not a fan of her, I think that seeing your boyfriend
going into the psych ward because of another woman would be heartbreaking.It’s one thing for Jim to say he has feelings for Pam, but it’s another for Jim to lose himself over her.
Also Jim’s breakdown would throw a serious wrench into her plans of moving to New York for the corporate job.
So could you think about writing another fic to go along with this one? Thanks
BTW do you might know when we might get another update for Hello Daddy? I’m really missing it.
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much for the review. But oof! I think several people would murder me if I added another chapter! I think this is firmly done and I’m back to the land of fluff. If you ever want to know more about a fic, just come say hi on Discord!
1 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2022 07:09 am Title: Marley's Chains
Um. Ow.
Well, this was a brutal reading experience. I thought you did a good job placing us in poor Jim's addled state of mind and giving us enough clues to figure out the ending in the text itself - the somewhat dreamy and inconsistent state of time, moving back and forth between places and realities without warning. And ugh, what an especially terrible moment for Jim to lose her, just when he has hope.
Ouch. Just ouch.
Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm sorry. There was other Halloween fluff, so hopefully that can cheer you up. So very sorry but thank you for the review!!
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2022 02:15 pm Title: Marley's Chains
This was a very interesting premise.
I can see Jim losing it if Pam did die,
especially when he finally realized he
had a real chance with her, but shot her down anyway.
Jim can now see how he truly took took Pam for granted, much like how Roy always did.
I can also sort of see how Jim having a break down over Pam could be the last straw for his relationship with Karen, because it’s very unlikely that
Jim would have the same reaction if she had died.
Author's Response:
Yeah it's quite a unique one! This is one of my favourite songs and I really wanted to write a fic for it, but it's about someone who's friend dies in a car crash, so it was never going to be a cheery one.
Yeah Jim absolutely wouldn't feel like this if Karen died - as he shouldn't!!
Thanks for the review
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2022 01:11 pm Title: Marley's Chains
Oh my god. You made me stop reading the fluffy goodness for this. Why do you want to make us cry?
Brilliantly written and beautiful corrections of the moments they missed but oh my god.
Please promise never to do this to us ever again if I give you all my jellies.
Author's Response:
Well that's why the fluffy one was there, so that you could recover! But yeah, there were a lot of missed opportunities for them.
SO SORRY and now back to the fluff
1 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2022 09:11 am Title: Marley's Chains
YOU ARE THE WORST! 😭 HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME.
but I love you and it was written really well but my feelings are hurt.
You can have all the jellies anyway because I love you.
Author's Response: I'm SO SORRY!!!! Thank you for the review, I promise not to write anything but fluff for a very long time